oc rater [warrior cats]

lindenview

name || LindenView (There isn't any specific reasoning behind his name, I just wanted to have something original; although 'view' is his suffix because of his great sight)
okay! totally understandable, and lindenview is a lovely & creative name!

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 gender || Male 
okay!

 rank || Warrior
yup!

 clan || Windclan
mhm!

 appearance || [link]
very, very beautiful & realistic!! nothing to say here!

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 personality || Lindenview is easygoing and kind, but he was a short temper. He is loyal to Windclan with all his heart, but he feels as if he's missing something in life. He will often wake up early just to walk across the moor and stare longingly into the distance.
pretty nice!! i feel like the short temper & walking across moor fit together nicely, like maybe he prefers spending time by himself more than other cats; with other cats, he may have a short temper. dunno, i'm probably wrong, so feel free to correct me! however, i feel like easygoing & short temper go against each other?

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 backstory || Lindenview was born as Lindenkit to his mother, Leafbrush, a brown tabby she-cat who is a warrior of Windclan, and Falconfur, a ragdoll who was a former kittypet, taken in by Windclan (he was part of Windclan before Leafbrush took him as a mate.) Lindenview was always looked down on for having a kittypet father, but he saved Hillkit, a small dusky brown tom as an apprentice from a hawk, which made up for his father.
cool! pretty interesting, but i do have a question for the last bit, though that doesn't affect the backstory much: was it lindenview who saved hillkit or falconfur? also, though there's nothing wrong with a simple backstory, i feel like some details could be added! how did lindenview's sisters handle having a kittypet father compared to him? did any cats tease lindenview for having a former kittypet as a father, or did he naturally dislike it? did falconfur know about lindenview's thoughts, and what was their relationship like? some more details on falconfur & lindenview's relationship, since the majority of the plot seems to be about falconfur's heritage!

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family || Mother- Leafbrush, a short, lithe brown tabby she-cat with white paws and yellow eyes. Father- Falconfur (formerly Falcon as a kittypet) a seal tortie ragdoll with sky-blue eyes.
Sisters- Caverntail, a tall, lithe brown tabby she-cat with sky-blue eyes;
Mouseberry; a short and plump fluffy brown she-cat with yellow eyes.
looks good here!

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 likes || Running, eating, socializing, daydreaming
yup!

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 dislikes || Pointless fighting, dawn patrols, squirrels
okay!

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final rating || 10/12 [bonus points included]

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thanks so much for letting me rate lindenview!! he's an amazing oc, and i can tell that he's pretty well thought-out!