We are not what other people say we are. We are who we know ourselves to be, and we are what we love. That's okay.
_Laverne Cox
Every person has a right to be who they are, and what they want to be, and no one else can judge them for that, and...
Hello, as promised, we'll start posting the results this week and we'll start with the special categories.
I'd like to thank you all for your patience and understanding, and I'd like to remind you that this is one of the many awards. Therefore, don't feel disheartened if you don't win.
~Cassie
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This blurb promises a story full of action, political wars, and warriors. However, the way it's written is a little confusing. There are many new terms that the reader won't comprehend and it looks like you wanted to include a lot of information in three small paragraphs.
The blurb is short and the story seems very clear, but it's not well-written. There are some grammatical mistakes and some run-on sentences. Also, there are many stories/blurbs with the same pattern (poor, unfortunate girl-cold CEO) which doesn't make this blurb unique.
The blurb is full of mystery but I think the first paragraph should have shorter sentences to increase tension. The second paragraph is nice but you should avoid repeating your protagonist's name so often.
Another well-written blurb. I liked the message but while most of the sentences flowed nicely, there were a couple that didn't sound so natural. It could be a matter of preference. Your blurb is great, nevertheless.
