Nat narrates:
I was so happy for a trip alone with Max, I wish we could stay there forever, just me and him. The only thing that seemed very funny to me was seeing him packing everything as if he didn't want to forget anything, and what made me laugh the most is that he ran out of the house, leaving me inside.
I didn't say anything to him, because I wanted to see his reaction when he noticed that his companion was missing; I fell in love with a crazy adorable. I was very surprised that he did not enter the house; and when I look out, he comes in to carry me like a sack of potatoes, which annoyed me a little.
- Hey! What are you doing? Put me down, I can walk alone!
- I didn't see you walk to the car when I left you inside. - Answer with some irony.
- Hahahaha, why do you let me in then?
- Oh well, forgive me, I didn't want to leave anything.
- Don't worry, you just left your companion, how does it feel?
- Stop it or I'll punish you. - That made me laugh.
- Oh yes, you scare me! - And he gives me a spanking.
I felt a slight burning sensation as his hand fell on my butt, but what really turned me on were the little circles he drew afterwards. He lowers me, indicates that I get on, when I was already seated he approached me to place the belt, but I took his hand away to bring him on top of me.
I got more than a kiss, Max literally ravaged my neck, I was eating it like it was the most delicious thing he's ever tasted. My excitement was only increasing, I slid my hand down his torso, until I reached his crotch and I could feel it grow for me.
I wanted so badly to tell him to get in the car, let's fog it up and make me scream with pleasure. But, as usual, he just excited me and then he got out of there, to run to the pilot's seat; Which is starting to piss me off.
We spent several hours in that car, until we got to a gas station, where he told me to go to the bathroom. When I got back, he had already bought sandwiches for the rest of the trip, although I didn't do anything to provoke him anymore and I didn't even speak so as not to feel uncomfortable.
- Nathan? Are you okay?
- Pretty good, I just want to eat some gummies!
- Are you mad at me?
- No, not at all... What makes you say that? - I mentioned ironically.
- Hey, we can talk about this, okay?
- I don't see the reason to talk about something that must be proved.
- Please, don't do this to me, you don't know how I feel.
- And you do know how I feel? I've been trying to show you how much I love you for two months; but you don't seem to care... You don't even want to say it.
- You shouldn't be so hard on me...
- You know what Max? Just let me eat the gummies in peace!
He was so furious at that moment, that I couldn't hide it; Actually, I think I was just waiting for the opportunity to express it. It was as if I needed to get it off my chest so that I wouldn't drown in that pain, and when I reached the reception of the beautiful hotel, the wound opened again.
- Hello.
- Good morning, we have a reservation.
-Oh, yes, Mr. Saran, he booked the couple's suite.
- As a couple? Are you sure it's ours? Isn't it the brother's?
- Mmm no. In fact, it is correct, why do you think it is wrong?
-Because the lawyer present here, he has a certain repudiation towards me.
My words seem to have a great impact on Max, since seeing him, I can see his eyes holding back tears. But as much as I try to analyze why he doesn't want to be with me, I still think my age is just a fucking excuse for him.
Narrates Max:
I understand that Nat is furious with me; however, there was no need to use the word "repudiation" to refer to himself. And the worst thing was that he told the receptionist, although she only looked at both of us, I know that her look said more than a thousand words.
When they gave us the key card, we immediately went to the elevator, I didn't say anything because the hotel bellman was with us. I went into the room, but I kept waiting for Nat to come in, so I went back to the door and there he was, talking to another man.
- Hey how old are you?
- I'm about to turn 18, why? Do you think I'm too young?
- Not at all, my ex was your age when we lost our virginity.
- Really? And you are older than him?
- That's right, almost five years older.
- Why aren't they together anymore? Didn't they love each other?
-I still love him, but he is abroad and he broke up with me because he said he wanted me to be happy with someone else.
"And you plan to wait for him until he returns?"
- Now that I know you, I'm thinking about it...
- If you're so happy, let him give you your tip...
I slammed the door in anger, leaving Nat outside with that asshole, it really is irritating to see him flirt with another man. Then I went to the shower, I was still very upset, the last thing I wanted was to see him, because I didn't want to say anything I might regret later.
-Max! Why did you say that to that boy?
-Let's clarify... First, that's not a boy, he's a man; And secondly, I'm taking a shower.
- We were just talking! What's the fucking problem?
- It seems that none, since I can't claim you, can I?
- No, you can't, and why are you jealous? You do not want to be with me!
- I would like you to be 26 years old and I 17, so that you could put yourself in my place.
- I'm sure I wouldn't be afraid to be with the person I love... And you know what?! I'm already tired of begging for your love! I am going out of here!
- Nat!... NAT!
I couldn't do anything to stop him, he was completely naked so I had to get dressed before going out to chase him. Arriving at the reception I asked about him and the lady told me that she saw him go out with the idiot bellboy, to a bar that she frequents near the hotel.
She gives me the address, indeed there they were, dancing together, as if they were a couple, and I won't allow that, I swear I want to beat that damned to death...
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I Did Not Abandon You "MaxNat"
FanfictionThis is the English translation of my MaxNat story (Yo No Te Abandoné), the English name is: "I Did Not Abandon You". Esta es la traducción al inglés de mi historia MaxNat (Yo No Te Abandoné)