TRIGGER WARNING: This story contains elements of suicide, self harm, and abuse. If these are sensitive subjects for you, please proceed with caution or avoid this story if you feel it is necessary.
Synopsis:
12 people of different ages, genders, and backgrounds find themselves trapped in a mysterious facility with no windows or exit. A masked mastermind with a robotic voice calling themselves "Fate" appears on screens instructing the prisoners to do certain tasks and providing them information, but there's a catch. Not only do the prisoners have no memory of being locked inside the facility, but they also have no idea what is happening beyond the facility's walls, the outside world.
Once Fate begins providing them hints and clues regarding themselves and the world on the outside, the crew begins to pick up on contradictions, confusing them and leading to debates amongst them as none of the information they are given correctly adds up.
As the contradictions pile up and the confusion grows stronger, the crew begins to struggle more and more to keep things together.
Who has the mental strength to overcome the barriers in their path and learn the truth of the world outside the facility?
Characters:
Alex Adler
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Notable attributes: brown hair, blue eyes, protagonistic
Height: 5'9
POB: Norvik
Bio: The level-headed protagonist of this story. Alex is approachable, understanding, and fairly hopeful given the circumstances. However, he is also smart. There are situations where he has to be honest about the hopelessness of a situation, but there are also many where his forward thinking is appreciated.
Nathan Holmes
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Notable attributes: blonde hair, stupid
Height: 5'10
POB: Norvik
Bio: A seemingly friendly guy who is rather dopey and slow. He finds it hard to make friends and appears to be rather vulnerable thanks to his idiocy.
Jobari Ubuntu
Sex: Male
Age: 21
Notable attributes: brown hair, hot-headed
Height: 5'9
POB: Norvik
Bio: A pretty vulgar guy. He is very distant towards others until he finds common ground with them. He means well when he acts how he does around others, but his attitude can lead him to come across as very unapproachable, despite him being a good person in nature.
Aurora
Sex: Female
Age: Unknown
Notable attributes: very white skin, silver hair
Height: 5'6
POB: Unknown
Bio: A mysterious girl who calls herself 'Aurora'. That's definitely not her real name, but she insists people call her it. She is always one step ahead of others and doesn't make any attempt to make friends, which leads her to end up being a very cautious and questionable woman.
Olivia Lopez
Sex: Female
Age: 20
Notable attributes: dirty blonde hair, bright clothes
Height: 5'5
POB: Spain
Bio: A very quick-tempered girl who needs everyone around her to know that she is a celebrity. Nobody has actually ever heard of her, but she insists on her importance and general superiority. No one knows where her strange complex comes from, but her insistence on her personal importance leads her to come across as condescending.
Hannah Frost
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Notable attributes: blonde short hair, slender figure
Height: 5'10
POB: Norvik
Bio: A cheerful girl who is generally easy to talk to and be friends with. She's quite tall for a girl, and her figure is very slim, but her being taller than many of the others doesn't stop them from befriending her.
Omar Nagi
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Notable attributes: black hair, skinny
Height: 6'0
POB: Norvik
Bio: A boy who finds it hard to make friends with others. He grew up without any friends and was prohibited from socialising with 'commoners', but this didn't turn him into a snobby, sour person. He's friendly if you get to know him, but people trying to make conversation with him does come as a surprise to him initially.
Erica West
Sex: Female
Age: 19
Notable attributes: blue hair, shy
Height: 5'1
POB: Norvik
Bio: A very shy girl who struggles with socialisation. She likes the presence of others once she is comfortable, but finding that comfort proves to be a challenge. Many think that some event in her life led her to act as distant as she does, but nobody is ever able to fully understand her.
Dante Marino
Sex: Male
Age: 22
Notable attributes: white hair, hot-headed
Height: 5'11
POB: Norvik
Bio: Another fairly quick-to-anger guy, but he's generally quite friendly. He's very sensitive about the scar buried on his face, and anyone who brings attention to it is quickly shut down by him once he refuses to discuss it with them. He is known for looking out for people, girls especially, and he seems to get incredibly worried about people for irrational reasons.
Violet Dixon
Sex: Female
Age: 23
Notable attributes: black hair, friendly
Height: 5'9
POB: Norvik
Bio: A girl who just might be too friendly, Her attitude is very optimistic and she shows a large variety of emotions, almost too many, which makes her come across as very strange and forceful in her feelings.
Maria Fernandez
Sex: Female
Age: 20
Notable attributes: dirty blonde hair, wears a jacket
Height: 5'8
POB: Mexico
Bio: A pretty cold and distant girl known for being a caregiver to children. She enjoys looking after kids despite her denial of it, and she actually has a very personal history connected to an orphanage, which ultimately is what inspired her to work at one. She is a very caring person, but only if you're already friends with her, and good luck trying to become one of them...
Adam Colonel
Sex: Male
Age: 30
Notable attributes: black long hair, smart, goat (actually human)
Height: 6'2
POB: Norvik
Bio: The man of reason in the FFF. Adam is always on top of everything and is never short of ideas or theories regarding the mysterious circumstances. Nobody knows much about him, and he seems to be hiding a lot about who he is and his past. After all, you don't grow up being so smart and perceptive just naturally...
Fate
Sex: None
Age: None
Notable attributes: Red mask
Height: None
POB: None
Friends: None
Bio: The anonymous mastermind of the Fatal Frolic. A real dickhead.
Additional Information:
Genre: Mystery/Sci-fi/Psychological horror (just minor elements really)
Fatal Order's original title was 'No Rhyme Or Reason'.
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