Hello everyone!
Thanks for all the love you guys have been giving. It is what makes me write, motivates me to do better.
This ones just a query
Writing this story, the feel is a little different. The characters aren't simple, or exactly whitey whitey. The story line isn't really mushy mushy , and it involves people engaged in complex bonds with each other.
Writing this is a little different, and at times I worry if the idea of plot and characters and their bonds around each other are clear to.the audiences??
I would really appreciate if you helped me around this, maybe a little feedback.
Is the story coming across as right?
Do I need to.make any changes? Are the characters clear, and can you relate to them??
Plzz so.let me know. Any changes, ideas ,suggestions are a welcome
❣❣❣love once again ❣❣❣
