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Title: 10/10 I love the uniqueness of the title and how it perfectly portrays the theme of your book.
Cover: 10/10 Perfect. No complaints there.
Blurb: 7/10 At first glance, it doesn't feel like much. I feel like you could have added something more to give an insight as to what to expect from the book. It is not really intriguing, per se.
But once I've read the book and I went back to reread the blurb, I understood the geniusness behind that dialogue.
While the idea is great, blurbs are meant for first impressions, so, I'd suggest letting your blurb expose a bit more of your books' theme.
Grammar: 10/10 I know I'm supposed to say something wise here but the grammar was perfect and I have no complaints.
Story flow: 10/10 This is the first short story I've read and I loved it. It was to the point and played with the readers' heart just like you wanted it to. And I loved the switch between the past and the present. Your storytelling style is very interesting.
Characters: 10/10 I loved the characters!! I love how you portrayed Kira's grief and helplessness. It left the reader heartbroken for her.
Setting \ World building; 10/10 No complaints!! There is nothing worth pointing out (in a bad way) in your book. Everything was perfect.
Originality: 9/10 While there is no shortage of stories with tropes like yours on wattpad or the big screen, your writing style and your heart wrenching ending is what makes your story stand out against the crowd.
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