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Title: 10/10 The title is unique and relevant to the story while also capturing the mysterious vibe of your book.
Cover: 10/10 Absolutely loved it. The crown and the creepy hands and the dark vibe. It's perfect and very fitting.
Blurb: 10/10 No complaints here. It introduces our characters, sets the theme and then we get to know the stakes.
Grammar: 10/10 I would like to think I'm a grammar nazi but even I didn't find anything wrong worth pointing out in your book. It was so perfectly written.
Story flow: 10/10 Your book was genuinely such a delight to read. I adored every single second. You knew how and when to give certain information, how to add mystery and depth to your characters. I was so in love.
Characters: 10/10 I think I've said this before but I'll say it again. I am so in love. There is just something about the way you presented your characters, the way you developed their personalities with the perfect touch of humor while balancing the dark parts of them. I loved Naima so much.
Setting \ World building; 10/10 I adored your writing style. The way you described that cave scene in the first chapter was absolutely beautiful. Writers sometimes find world building hard and it just turns into a lot of info dump which is very annoying and I didn't find that in your writing so that's a major plus point. Everything was very smooth and you gave just the right amount of information away without exposing too much.
Originality: 10/10 The idea, the execution, the writing style, all of it combined just made it something so unique and fun to read.
Enjoyability: 10/10 If you can't tell from the score, I absolutely loved your book. Would 100% recommend it and I hope this book gets a lot more reach and engagement because you deserve it
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