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Title 3/5
The title feels too long and does not let the reader discover the content on their own.
Cover 3/5
The cover is very bright for this type of genre. Try to add something dark to show a contrast between their normal lives, the bright side and their secret life, a darker side where they will face the darkness of their world.
Blub 3/5
The blub is straight and tells the readers exactly what they will find reading the book. You can try making it more mysterious, to make the reader eager to find the book's secrets.
Characters 4/5
You can develop your characters, showing why and how they make decisions, the way they think, and why are they chosen, and don't focus only on the main characters. Their families and the people around them can impact the story as well.
Plot 3.5/5
The story is a bit fast-paced, without a world building and much character development. Slowing down the story could help you develop the ideas.
The idea is good, and the beginning is well-written; try to finish chapters with suspense to make the readers more eager for the next chapters.
Grammar & Vocabulary 3.5/5
Your grammar is good, but you have a few mistakes that can confuse the reader. You can also improve the dialogue because you tend to combine the dialogue of multiple characters in a single paragraph, and it can be confusing.
Enjoyment 4/5
I enjoyed reading this story. With more development, it has the potential of a great and captivating story.
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