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Title 4 /5
The title fits the story and drowns attention to the book
Cover 3/5
The cover could use some improvement. The title should be more visible, as well as the author. The writing is small and could be missed if you are not paying attention.
Blub 3/5
The blub intrigues the reader and makes him want to read the story.
Characters 2/5
The characters have little dialogue; everything about them is description. Having a dialogue between them can show the reader the little things that a description can't, for example, their feelings and the way they are behaving with each other.
You could also try showing their relationships with the people around them, showing how different the cultures are between them.
Plot 4/5
The plot is intriguing, and the fact that it is based on a real story makes the reader more curious about it.
Grammar & Vocabulary 4/5
Your grammar and vocabulary are good; you can separate the dialogue from the description in different paragraphs.
Enjoyment 5/5
I enjoyed the story, having a bittersweet love, something real not the usual fairytale.
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