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Title: 3/5
The title fits the story, showing the reader a bit of the story.
Cover: 4/5
The cover reflects the genre of mystery of the book.
Blub: 4/5
The Blub gives details about the story but gives away too much, not letting the reader discover on their own.
Characters: 2/5
The interaction between carachters is very little. Luth interacts with many people but at the same time, he doesn't comunicate with them much.
There are main characters like Luth wife but she doesn't talk much and most she just follows Luth, if he says something she does without much questioning, without having an opinion.
Not letting the carachers react to the events, doing multiple thing at once.
Plot: 2/5
The plot is confusing, feeling rushed. Moving from one place to another, without transition between places. Not letting the reader sjust to things before they change.
Grammar &Vocabulary: 3/5
The grammar is good with a few mistakes. To make the story flow better, separate the dialogue from the description and make the paragraphs smaller.
Enjoyment: 2/5
The story has potential, with a bit of work it could be a very good book.
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