𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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Book : AKS-E-RASTHA: A Tale of Love, Redemption and Self Discovery By oceanmount019
ANALYSIS
Plot:
Hailey Roosevelt is a business woman. After escaping from the streets of agony, dusts of distress while dragging behind the wheels of the past. Few incidents changed her life path. In Qatar, Hailey finds her counterpart, Jack Harrison, son of the most famous lawyer. Will she be able to soften herself? Does melted wax recatch fire?
(Taken from Description box)
Characters:
Hailey Roosevelt is portrayed as a broken, strong, resilient lady who was born in the mine areas of Qatar, causing her to be darker skinned than most.
Jack Harrison is portrayed as an American man whose family lives in Qatar and works in the law firm industry. He is bright, attention-capturing, and slightly egotistic. Although he gives off playboy energy, he isn't one.
These are the two main characters of the story. Every other minor character are family and friends of the both of them.
Writing Style: 6/10
This book is written in a first person POV format with the two main characters having time to speak in their own voice when required. Due to the first person POV, there is a lot of internal monologue written out for the writer to see.
Spellings and Vocabulary: 3/10
Punctuation and paragraphing needs to be worked on. Some spelling is off in most of the writing
OVERALL IMPRESSION :
It follows the clique genre of strong girl with trauma and bad boy falling in love, just in a different setting.
Strengths & Weaknesses:
There is a running plot that can be extensively expanded upon, which is a good thing.
If care is not taken, the plot might also become one of those common cliche plots.
Recommendation:
The vocabulary and punctuations are making the book difficult to understand. A good editing will go a long way in making it much more readable to the readers.
I would recommend giving one chapter to one POV instead of merging two POV into one.
The pacing of the story is all over the place, I would recommend extensive editing of the story
Authors' notes or reactions should be saved till the end of the chapter.
Also it seems like the last few chapters were written in bold, I assume it was unintentional.
