𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
𝐎𝐩𝐞𝐧 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐬 ( )
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Every writer starts as a beginner, fueled by a simple idea and a spark of inspiration. But how do you...
Ethan Grey is portrayed as a stern, smart, efficient, and feared man. He is a CEO who is at the top of his game.
Emma Davis on the other hand is shown as a smart, down-to-earth, humble low-class woman. She is bubbly, compassionate, and empathetic towards those around her.
Writing Style:
The book is written in the third person pov but with a focus on that character, which could be Ethan or Emma, depending on the chapter. We are given a clear view of their thought process as well as seeing the actions of others as a whole.
Spellings and Vocabulary: 9/10
There are little to no errors in spelling and vocabulary. Paragraphing and sentence construction is done just right.
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Overall Impression:
Let me just say that your method of writing is my style. If I was a man, I would marry Emma. She has such a beautiful soul and I'm glad that Ethan's personality isn't the typical cold and arrogant boss. I noticed the name twining going on with the both of them, not sure if it is intentional.
Strengths & Weaknesses:
The way the story is written is its biggest strength. It is very interesting to read and the characters feel human, rather than fictional. You can find yourself easily immersed in the world of the story.
I love the titles of the chapters, it is very similar to my writing style.
