𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
𝐎𝐩𝐞𝐧 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐬 ( )
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Every writer starts as a beginner, fueled by a simple idea and a spark of inspiration. But how do you...
The title is very fascinating but it might not reach the reader's mind if they don't know the word's meaning beforehand, I suggest you to put a meaning of it like a quite in the description also.
Cover - 20
The cover attracts a lot of attention from the first glance, but I think you can make the backside aesthetic a little more visible because the main characters' iamgw is very bright which is hiding the back aesthetic of the 'oculto' hence not giving out the meaning if not seen carefully.
Blurb - 15/15
The blurb attacks the reader's mind and soul with full force if I say it honestly, I was fully hypnotized by the blurb to read more.
Writing style -10/10
The writing style of the writer makes it even more mysterious and thriller then it already is. So it's a 10 out of 10 for me.
Pacing fluidity- 10/10
The pacing of this story is going smoothly, not too fast and not too slow. The pace is perfect for a mystery/thriller story.
Describing scenery and settings - 20/20
The way the writer describes scenery and settings is even more mysterious than the plot itself, it's the literal meaning ofcourse.
Character description -10/10
The character description given in between the chapter is very well written and gives way for the reader's to imagine how the character might look in reality.
Dialogues - 20/20
The dialogue writing is the best, the quotes they deliver and the way they sy pick-up lines or make dark sentences is just awesome.
Grammar and vocabulary - 8/10
The grammar and vocabulary of the author is as nice as a professional I must say, they used many complex words to make it mysterious, there were some mistakes which I found not so big but I have to mention because there was nothing else I found bad about this awesome story: in the first chapter you wrote 'your,soul' it should be 'your soul', their were spelling mistakes as you wrote 'stops' when it should have been 'steps' and 'there' when it should be 'they', 'dead' when it should be 'death' and you wrote way twontimes unintentionally like 'way cruel way' it could be 'very cruel way' , you wrote 'jae' as 'jake' and lastly I don't think there is actually a word 'timider'.
Plot - 10/10
As far the story has reached the plot is very mysterious and nicely built, keeping the reader hooked.
Character development - 20/20
The character development has been going up rapidly, Taehyung wild and reckless traits are showing.
Overall enjoyment - 10/10
I totally enjoyed this story to the fullest, there were no mistakes that made me lose interest and the plot and dialogues delivery is something that kept me hooked till the end.
Short review -
This is one of the stories that will leave you hanging for a while, it's very hooking and the writing style is very neat and mysterious just the way a mystery/thriller genre reader would like it. I recommend this story to every reader out there who likes mystery and thriller genre, it will touch your soul' for sure.
