Whispered Obsessions
By Eshi12x
A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Characters:
Kristen is seen as a childish, trouble-making rich kid who is tagged the black sheep of the family, hence why she is sent away to boarding school. Alexander, on the other hand, is seen as intelligent, has a way with words but equally a trouble maker.
Writing Style:
The book is written in first person POV with the main character highlighted at the beginning of each chapter.
Spellings and Vocabulary: 9/10
The spelling and vocabulary have no issues. Paragraphing is also very good
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
The first chapter kinda threw me off for a moment there, it was very underwritten in comparison to the subsequent chapters but it gets better. I, for one, very much enjoy the conversations between Alex and his father. Strengths & Weaknesses:
The distinction between the voice of Kristen and Alexander is both a strength and weakness. Kristen's voice seems more childish in comparison to Alex's.
Recommendation:
I recommend going through the first chapter again and try to up the writing to be on par with the others. This is because first impressions matter.
High school troupe is one that has a lot of plot material that can be built on, but be careful not to fall into the common clique pitfalls.
Target Audience :
14 - 30
Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel
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