I won't let you. (Suntan) (Original Starfall AU)

All the mishmash (SOME CLEANUPS)

So I know the book might be messy a little bit too much, because I am a messy person and I don't give a duck about that, but I think it's better to first clean up things before it gets messier for you guys.

"Bold text" Means somebody special (ykyk) speaks (It's used with bold cursive alternatively)

"Normal text" is just somebody speaking

"cursive text" Is somebody whispering, speaking softly or is used for somebody speaking in dream world (except for Kel, dog, omori, sunny).

cursive text Is somebody thinking.

bold cursive text is SOMEBODY thinking/ communicating at the same time.

This thing is rarely used, and doesn't mean anything, just a decoration or used in special situations to mark the things.

Normal text is just narrating. if it's somebody's perspective I don't mean to make it look like a journal but just kind of action description from their view. When I change perspective in one chapter, I write it out (-- Sunny -- and things like that). When I change in another chapter it's just readers mission to figure out who is that.

I make breaks between the text just for the esthetics, and to be easier to read.

STORY'S WORLDS!!

This might be also confusing so there is the list of whatever tf is going on in the same timeline.

REAL WORLD.

"Please live for me.

I love you."

Real world is just real world. All real actions are taking place there.

HEADSPACE (Sunny)

OMORI stabbed himself.

Y'all should know what it is. Just know that it's different from other things in list. It isn't used much, and not too relevant (except for WHITE SPACE that is part of it.)

BLACK SPACE (Sunny)

Ya should know this one too. Not really used I think.

ORANGE SPACE

Welcome to orange space.

Cutting the weeds just make the problem bigger.

This is a bit of a problem to explain cuz I didn't really think that through.

This place is the core of Kel's mind and it will be crucial for later. Sunny explores it layer by layer so he isn't really in the core of core (???)

Core's leader is longsnout, but it's justin Sunny's vision since he is getting too scared of Dog and sees things in dream.

The reason I chose longsnout was that when I watched deep dives into black space, Longsnout was considered as the opposite of cat butler. So I made orange space the opposite. Quiet. Everything looking the same. Minimalism.

But more disturbing.

KEL'S DREAM WORLD

Dog?

"Yes?"

The dog just emerged from the shadows.

this is right where Kel is. Similar to headspace. of course the place is Kel's mind, but Sunny can access it by sleeping by Kel.

It might affect real world.

Additional notes:

DOG hears only thoughts of humans, because it was "programmed" to hear humans, but ignore animals since they are also "programmed". This is why it doesn't hear Sun's (cat) thoughts.

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I try to make every chapter 1000 words at minimum. If I don't, I make up in another chapter. I don't overwork, it's kind of my goal to get more words in the story.

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At the end of every chapter there is the number of words for the chapter without author notes.

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As soon as I get the invitation- I'm joining ao3 and I'll put this story there! dw, wattpad is a lot easier to use so it will get priority with updates.

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All main characters will be getting their own chapter.

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Style & For you takes up so long because character design is important to me, since I want to illustrate the book more.

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I think this is all. If there is anything unclear, just ask, but if it's about lore I might give only shortened answer. The best story is a not spoiled one!