It All Started With A Monster(Under Major Construction)

I.A.S.W.A.M.9

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Anyways enough of the serious stuff that's lame,how are you guys liking the special question conversations do you guys like or hate? Tell me what you think,and the reason why I do is it to kinda get an idea of what I should do in the story because besides 'My F*cked-Up Life this is the first story I've done right from my mind all the other stories I've already written and then I post them,so how do you think I'm doing with that?

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(Brooke)

"Mom! I’m going to work! “I shouted.

"Okay honey have fun, love ya! “She said.

"Alright love you 2!" I said walking out the door.

I walked up to my car and noticed something on my windshield between the wipers. I picked up the box that was there and read the card taped to it.

'To Brooke,

I hope you have fun at work. Call me when you get off so we can talk about tomorrow, me and Zack made plans.'

      Love Chase.

I opened the box and there was a red rose and another card but smaller this time, I opened it up and read it.

'So I asked the lady at the floral shop and she said that red can mean friendship and love, so I picked it for both.'

I smelled the rose and blushed, 'aw....'  I said out loud. I put everything back into the box and got inside my car and pulled out and left.

 *

"Mel I'm here! “I said walking into the shop and putting my bag down.

"Hey Brooke, how’ve been? “He asked.

"Oh I'm good. “I said tiredly.

"Boy troubles? “He asked knowingly.

"You know me so well. “I said.

"Well, there isn't really anything to do, no one's brought in a car yet or even called. “He said sounding disappointed.

“Slow day, that sucks. “I said.

"Yeah badly because, if we don't start getting more customers I might have to shut this place down.” He said.

 I jumped up from my seat shocked, “What no Mel. Don’t even say that.” I said.

"Well it's true I just don't have enough money to keep this place running anymore.” He said.

"Let me buy it from you Mel, I’ll clean it up and bring it back and then you can buy it back or I can co-own, I get half you get half, I have 7,000 dollars saved up from working and I already got a bunch of money saved up for college, come on Mel it'll be great. I mean you're like a dad to me, please I won't let you down.” I pretty much begged.

"Okay it's a deal, we'll co-own together.” He said.

“Great you get the money half and I'll do all the cleaning up oh this is great I've always wanted my own shop.” I said happily.

"But my grandson, he's in trouble and as his punishment his parents are making him work here for the summer so you guys are going to be working together.” He said.

"Well that's great I'll have a helper.” I said.

"But Brooke I have to warn you, my grandson, he's a quite the flirt and he's your age and a looker.” He warned.

"Oh I could care less, I’ll put him in his place, don’t worry about it Mel you know me." I said.

"I know."

"So what's his name?” I asked.

"James.” He said.” Does he go to my school?"

"Yeah, why do you know him?” He asked.

"Yeah he's pretty cool, we hang out sometimes.” I said, “He is a flirt though, that’s not a lie.” I said laughing. “So when's he starting? “I asked.

"Tomorrow.” He answered.

*

"Stupid guys always trying to flirt with me,” I muttered walking into my house. I can’t believe that guy had the nerve to slap my ass while I bending over fixing his car. I showed him though, by spraying oil all over his clothes. Didn’t even see it coming.

"How was work honey?” My mom asked as I walked into the leaving room.

"Mom you'll never believe this.” I said practically hoping with excitement.

"What, Brooke calm down before you hop through the ceiling.” She said laughing.

"Mel is letting me Co-own the shop!” I yelled excitedly.

"That's great Brooke, but why?” She asked.

"Well because, he’s low on money so he's gonna let me clean the shop up so we get more business!” I said. “And you know James, remember James, well he's gonna be helping this summer, so we'll get it cleaned up in no time.” I said happily.

"That's great sweetie, I'm so proud of you.” She said walking over and giving me a hug.

"Well I'm gonna go take a shower and then head to bed, cause I'm going to the shop early so we can start coming up with ideas for redoing the shop. “I said getting up. “Night mom, love ya.” I gave her and a kiss on the cheek then went up to my room.

I laid down in bed after my shower.

Today was a pretty good day. 1st Chase giving the rose and card, then I found out I get to co-own the shop and fix it up. I fell asleep with a smile on face that night.

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So hope you guys liked it!

It was a little more of Brooke's life,and wasn't it sweet what Chase did.When I typed it I thought Awww....you go Chase!  Lol

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