Can't Be Claimed (Being Revised)

Can't Be Claimed

Hello dear fans. New story! Read comment and enjoy! tell me what you think seriously :) and vote lol :P

So I have noticed that this story has a lot of mistakes and alot of things don't make sense so I'm going to go ahead and fix them without changing the story too much but let's see how it goes.

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I opened my eyes and my gaze fell on an angel. I mean, maybe he wasn't a real angel with wings and a halo but he definitely looked the part. His eyes were a light shade of gray I'd never seen before, his hair was raven black. paired with a very strong jaw line and a really handsome face. He was tall with broad shoulders, and a mucsular chest. Damn this boy was something.

"You need to come with me now" he demanded in a voice so soft and smooth.

I didn't react. I could only lie there frozen in my bed. I could hear my heart beating faster. I couldn't tell if I was nervous or just really, really scared. I mean how the heck did he get in here in the first place? What was he doing here?

"Did you not hear me? We need to go now!" he said in a bit of a harsher tone snapping me out of my thoughts. Right he was still here. What should I do? Our eyes were locked and I couldn't look away, or do much of anything. He looked at me expectantly, but after seeing me motionless he rolled his eyes.

The spell was broken. I knew he wasn't supposed to be here which meant I had to do something to get the heck out of there. I quickly ran from my bed to my door hoping to escape and run down the stairs to the kitchen. My hand was about to grasp the door knob when I felt a pair of arms wrap around my waist. No, no, no this couldn't be good. I opened my mouth to scream, but he put his hand over it.

I still tried to scream, but it was muffled no one would hear me. I was going to get kidnapped by a really hot guy. I started kicking and thrashing, he wasn't going to take me that easily.

Damn! This boy was strong though and I couldnt get out of his hold. I elbowed him a couple of times but all I got was a low grunt, I think I might've gotten a growl too, but I'm not sure.

All of a sudden I heard screams and some shots fired downstairs, I froze. The screams had been from my mom, my two sisters and my little brother. My dad wasn't home. He never was. He was usually busy in his office and he always came home really late.

Tears began streaming down my face. I stopped struggling, what was the point? I couldn't move I was paralyzed in fear. Did that mean I was being kidnapped? The guy that had grabbed me pulled me back quickly going through the window and hiding in the tree outside.

There were footsteps and male voices, but it was so hard to tell because my eyes were blurry with unshed tears.

"No one else here, bossman" one of them grunted.

"Good. Now go to their money and their jewels and take anything worth any value." said the one that I suspected was the boss. They all had masks so I couldn't see their faces, not that it would have mattered anyway.

There was silence for a couple of minutes and I couldn't hear anything not even the crickets outside. Every thing was eerily quiet, but the sound of glass breaking erupted the quietness.

"Retards! Daniel tell your stupid brother to be more careful. Goddamnit!" the so called bossman yelled.

I sat with the stranger trying to watch through tears, as these psychos robbed my house. My family had been killed and for what, money. I should have been there too, which means they would have killed me too. This stranger saved my life, for now I guess.

The stranger pushed me into his car despite the fact, that I still tried to get away. He drove a black prius and was looking directly at the road. Neither of us had said a word. I couldn't speak. How could I after witnessing that? There's nothing he could have said to make me feel better, just like there was nothing I could say without crying my eyes out.