Last chapter was pretty crazy yeah. But I'm trying to make this story interesting, and I don't just want a story I want a story full of twist. I hope everyone is following who is reading this story. Honestly I feel like I'm writing and nobodies reading even though I have about 23 reads. Guys please comment, even if it's just "hey good story" "hey I'm a little confused" please be kind though, but I would appreciate some feedback, I don't know if I'm going to far and this whole thing is kinda just my first story, so I'm just writing to figure out where I go.
Chapter 5:
Nowhere To Be Found
(Derek's point of veiw)
Hotch might be going mad, as he explains all of this, I look back at Reid who seems to be the only one understanding any of it.
"Hotch man I'm following you but it seems so... Impossible like a one in a million."
Hotch nods at me and keeps driving.
"worth a shot." Hotch says as he looks straight ahead as he keeps going down a country road. I jus shake my head. Dudes a little crazed right now...
(Elizabeth's point of veiw)
"Hey Liz you remember me baby, the boy you always was afraid of. Hehe... Look at me now babe, I got a gun and I got you and Hotch's stupid little son..." The man holding me chuckles in my face, his breathe hot and smelly. Gosh... Who in the world was this? I don't know what I did... Tears start streaming down my face.
"tell me who you are! I can help you .... Whatever you need just let the boy go, he has never hurt anyone... Keep me and kill me if you must but let him go!" I yelled at him because there was no way I was going to stay here any longer I'd rather let Jack live and me die.
"Baby you know I can't do that." his voice was mocking...
"My girl promised to Aaron."
"What?" I Asked stuttering.
"Remember? That day?" he laughed and leaned closer, I couldn't see his face through the blindfold, but could feel his breathe.
"w-what day..." I was so confused I shook.
"that day. Aaron's mommy was there. She looked upset, she smiled at you and Aaron talked to Aaron and left." I gulped after he said that... Aaron is... The Aaron I knew? I thought ... I mean there are so many Aaron's and he looks nothing like he did back when we were... In that... Place.
"oh god... Anthony? T-that's you... Isn't it?
"ha baby you don't recognize me?"
"no I didn't... But ... Anthony that was so long ago when you hated us? But... Why did you hate us?" my confidence grew... I could play Anthony like a fiddle... I hoped.
"why I hated you..."
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When Anthony was 6.
"you little twerp gosh you never do what's right!" Anthony's older brother kicked him in the chin.
"what- what I do..." tears filled his eyes.
"you were born!" his brother slapped him.
"mommy!" Anthony screeched and ran to his mom.
"shut up I'm listening to the radio!" his mom yelled at him.
"Mom Anthony tried to kill me!" his brother revealed long gashes in his arm.
"oh my god Anthony what did you do! Oh my gosh your evil I knew it!" Anthony's mom screamed at him loudly filling the room with more hate than was already lingering there.
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(Elizabeth's point of view)
I gulped listening.
"And see, then I saw you and Aaron and Blake and all the love you got from her. I know why she liked you... Because you kept Aaron strong. But why didn't she ever care about other kids? Ugh Aaron had so much... even you as a friend and a brother who loved him. So much... Even visited him for a while. Why couldn't I have That! Why!" he breathed heavily.
"Now Aaron won't have anything!" he yelled pulling a knife to my throat.
During all this Jack was silent till now when he heard the man scream at me.
"Leave her alone!" he yelled confidently at Anthony.
"Ha acts like Aaron! Brave little twerp! Jade!"
My heart raced as I heard a door open and a girls voice
"I got the kid now you handle her... You need to do it in five minutes.
"no! No! Please please don't take Jack! Don't hurt him oh my god please!" I screeched it out so loud Jade slapped me and yelled enough.
"I got The boy." I heard Jade say. I heard Jack screech and a loud slap sound which brought tears to my eyes. I heard Jack say as Jade dragged him away "Don't worry Lizzy my daddy will find you" and I heard him sniffling back tears.
I sobbed and as Jade left I broke down and threw a fit.
"Anthony! You you you gotta let me-" I stopped as he put something sharp against my neck and I felt my heart race. "I'll save you the pain... You won't feel yourself die if your knocked out..." he sounded sympathetic, until something hard and blunt hit my head.
Then all I saw was darkness...
He was right I couldn't feel anything but cold.
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Fiksi PenggemarWhen BAU Profiler Aaron Hotchner finally begins to smile at his son Jack's babysitter, and begins to have feelings for her, his son and her are kidnapped. It's up to him and his brother he hasn't seen in 8 years to find them before time runs out. Wi...