My Sad Endings

~This Mortal Coil~

~My version of the end of The Lovely Bones. Different, but somewhat kind of close to it~

I ran to the tree that was once filled with leaves that flew away like birds. The field was covered in wheat grains. Ready to be picked for harvesting. A little girl sat underneath the tree looking off into the distance. I approach her and she turned to me, smiling.

"I come here almost everyday. I like to listen to the wind blowing," she said.

"I like it too. I'm Susie. Susie Salmon," I told her. She smiled.

"Flora. Flora Hernandez." She was one of Mr. Harvey's victims.

"The others should be here soon," she told me. I look beyond the field. Bright lights forming meaning the others are coming. The others who were murdered by Mr. Harvey. I see them approaching. All of them. From the oldest to the youngest. I felt a hand my shoulder. I turn to see Holly. I gasp and hug her. Tears streaming down my cheeks.

"I thought you were gone forever. It's so good to see you," I said. She smiled.

"I'm glad to see you too. Are you ready?" She asked. I nod. That was when I started getting emotional, not sad, but happy. I was together and moving on with people who were killed like I was.

"Today is the day we get to move on. We are all sisters. We went through a battle and we all finished our battles. Today we move on to heaven. We get to watch over our families and we watch as they conquer their battles of losing us. Many already know what happened, but one of us is still freshly new. Susie Salmon was only 14 when she was murdered and raped by a man named Mr. Harvey. Her life was changed, but now she will move on with us and begin a new life as a guardian angel for her parents and her brother and sister. Now we are all ready. You may all pass the tree to move onto heaven."

I walked with Holly. My life ended short, but I will always live on in my sister, my younger brother who only grew up a few years with me, my mom, and my dad who will never forget me.

I wasn't forgotten or lost. I was alive. I was alive in my own perfect world. But to many I was gone, but I put it like this. I just dissappeared from the world for a while.

My name is Salmon. Like the fish. First name Susie. I was 14 years old when I was murdered on December 6th, 1973. I was here for a moment and then I was gone.

I wish you all a long and happy life.

~This ending wasn't really sad, but it could be like a sad and happy ending at the same time. Hope you enjoyed this ending. Comment, Vote, or Share. Stay Beautiful!!!!