I'll put this as simply as I can.
That was amazing.
It was extremely well-written. The emotion, mood, characters, plot, fits together perfectly and I have to say, this is another one of those rare stories that I have read that brought me in so much. You depicted the emotion very well and I can only say I'm excited for more.
The idea that Ryden is "alive" in a way and the way you developed the story (in only two parts too!) is not only creative, but a new, original idea which makes this story 100x more worth the read.
You have got my fan and vote because...I'm just at a loss for words.
I'm sorry this critique is quite short, please excuse me while I try to find words to express how much I loved your story.
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The Critique
Non-FictionI'm just like the rest of you. A normal person who just loves to write and read. But the thing is, writing can never be perfect and there are many writers out there who want their work to be at least 99.99% amazing. Here I critique stories; I may be...
