a visit from daddy. wait why'd he bring him?

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     soooo i had a writing party with genesis4663 while writing this!!!!!!!! it was soooo fun!!!!!! i would like to say i have read alot of good storys recently!!!!!!!!!!!! one of them is

'Obsessed at first sight' by adrianlover97

another

'make me forget' by genesis4663

and

'a shadow of a rose' by DeathsShadow

also

'a cruel master vampire' by aystar85

     i love these story's!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they r the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you will check them out and read them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and if you want me to read a story put the title in the comments below!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now i would like to say that i don't have any comments really talking about the story!!!!!!!!!!! this upsets me. and ofcaurse i'm gonna update. now enogh of my rant on with the story!!!!! ENJOY AND LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!

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***(Erics pov)

     she was so eleagant standing on that stage sining to her hearts content. it made me love her all the more. she was singing dancing in the dark by lady gaga. she looked pretty tipsy, so i'm betting she had a few drink's. it frustrated me but i guess i can understand. she's had a lot on her mind and it's helping her relax.

     she slowly drew the song to an end and the crowed went wild. i didn't like how these disgusting men were staring at my angel. they were probably thinking disgusting thoughts about my angel. but i couldn't just go up to every guy here and punch him in the face. looking over i watched my angel smile such a bright smile that it made my heart do flipps. bringing the microphone back up she started another song

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

What's wrong with me?

Why do I feel like this?

I'm going crazy now

No more gas in the rig

Can't even get it started

Nothing heard, nothing said

Can't even speak about it

All my life on my head

Don't want to think about it

Feels like I'm going insane

Yeah

It's a thief in the night

To come and grab you

It can creep up inside you

And consume you

A disease of the mind

It can control you

It's too close for comfort

Throw on your brake lights

We're in the city of wonder

Ain't gonna play nice

Watch out, you might just go under

Better think twice

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