Spectral Regalia

Chapter 139: Pathless At Sunset

!!!!! Pr Credits To Draconis Von BloodTrap &  Dragonofsomesort  Who Constantly Help With SR chapters, Please take the time to rep them for their work :)

just some notes inside for anyone interested.
Spoiler (Skip if you don't care)
(I was going to post a long paragraph about some so called "reader" who criticized me with false points after pretending he read my story, but i honestly cant be bothered to feed any trolls.

That being said, on a positive note, early chapter! also i was quite happy recently when i was writing 139 and 140 because i think i found my pacing plot wise, i'l admit Seleria was a mess  but as a new starting amateur web author i was bound to make mistakes and stumble a bit, i hope with v5 i can bring you all a more stable story pacing. what i admire most about Chinese Xianxia novels and Korean light novels is that their pacing seems to make every chapter hit a certain note and end it on a certain note without leaving anything unchecked, i'm still far from that but i'm learning.

Also just a reminder to you all, i am not trying to write a xianxia novel and i'm not trying to write a western novel. I am trying to find my own mix of excitement in literature. That being said i do plan to add some nice jokes referencing puns/slang used in xianxia novels such as "give me face" or "Mt Tai" or my personal favorite "didn't know whether to laugh or cry" i truly think it would add to the comedy aspect for Avrin to react to those accordingly.

Btw i'v been reading over the Pred copies of SR's chapters and going over it im honestly proud to have dedicated readers to pr. Both of those guys are doing a great job especially organizing paragraphs and picking up on minor things but more importantly the grammatical errors and replacing words with things that sound better, you should all know that i always write these notes as i'm about to post a chapter so it is not Pred other then me going over it, so please cut those two some slack.)

Important

I'm Looking for a proficient Pr who loves my second story Ethereal Sovereign to Pr what i have completed, i dont have anything special to give in return but you will receive a look at the artwork of spectral regalia early as well as get the raw copies to read before they are pred if you are to eager, also you will have access to the drive folder where i write the raw's for both ES and Sr.

I'm honestly looking for someone reliable and who wont suddenly vanish. Someone who can keep communication and most importantly is good with Grammar

feel free to PM me, please know if i don't reply it means i'v received dozens upon dozens of Pms so in advance i apologize to those i cant reply to on time Sad
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The small girl wasn't sure what she saw at first, but when she stepped closer and pushed away some of the shrubbery, her face paled and the small basket she held dropped to the ground. She looked at the resting Avrin with fright and fell to her knees as her little body quivered. The scene of blood was all too etched into her mind.

She remained like this for nearly a minute before she regained some composure. "What do I do!" She said, not too loud nor too quiet. She stood up nervously and carefully approached Avrin, her small legs were shaking with fright. She found a nearby stick and carefully leaned down, picking it up and continuing to walk towards Avrin. She extended the tip of the stick with intention to poke him. "M-Maybe I should get Grandma..." She muttered as the stick got closer.

Right as it was about to touch his side, his eyes snapped open and he reached out on reflex, clutching his hand over the stick before glancing at the girl. Of course, the poor girl hadn't received such a deep fright for a long time. She jumped back and screamed, tripping over herself and falling on her butt. Fortunately, no one would notice a difference dirt over her already dirty dress.