The time of our life (COMPLETED)

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Hi guys! I've made a short story and I wanted to know what you guys think!! this isn't part of the time of our life haha BUT its a korean fic :))) 

pls tell me what you think :^)

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The cold frosty dew formed in the window's of the mansion, numb to the touch of Kim Jeonghui as he taps the window gently, drops of water gliding as he tries to write his name. Warm lights from the fireplace fill the mansion along with the overlaying lights from the Christmas tree. The succulent smell of roasted ham, turkey to the sweet taste of wine. "Jeonghui!! Come here" his father calls. "It's time to open presents" Jeonghui runs to the tree and gets a gift. "This is one big gift" He says as he opens it. "Jeongie, I really had a hard time buying that for you and I'm sure you'll like it " his mother says laughing.

"A PS4?!?!? " Jeonghui says with eyes wide open, admiring his new gadget. "That's not all" His dad grins and brings out eight discs. "We can play all---"

His phone rang. As soon as he checked his phone, he placed it back in his pocket.

"What was that?" Mrs. Kim asks.

Mr.Kim just laughs. "Nothing, probably just some chain message". People say that things that happen in our life was something out of their grasp. It might be, but this was the start of Jeonghui's grief.

Smiles turned into frowns, overlaying bright lights fade, happiness to sorrow. "Jeonghui, please stay here don't move or make any noise okay?" Mrs. Kim kisses his cheeks, about to close the cabinet.

"Mom... W-What's going on?" The innocent Jeonghui asks. "Honey, it's uhm.. Something came up...We need to do something and you can't come with us." " Jeongie, just do what I say okay? Everything will be alright". Jeonghui slowly nods. His mother closes the the mini cabinet , perfectly fitting the small boy.

Ear piercing gunshots filled the air, the joyous Christmas songs along with the exhilarating laughter and singing of the children now trembled with fear. Cars everywhere, screeching along with the sound of a thousand footsteps hungry for something. Jeonghui who was struggling to see what was happening from a very small hole from the cabinet, still tried to call his mother. No answer. Seeing his father blocking the door, he tries again. "Appa..." he calls but he seemed like a ghost who was out of the picture, inexistent.

The door swung open, and his father failed to keep them from coming in. Men in black, all armed from head to toe with unrecognizable faces. "What do you want from us?!?" Mr. Kim says as he tried to look strong. The man , with only half of his facial features showing. The man seemed to laugh under his mask as he holds the gun in front of Jeonghui's appa.

The father strangles the man as the other holds him. "Yeobo!!! Please just let us go!" His mother yells. The blazing fire of the bullet shot him.

"Yeobo!!!" The wife shouts, running and hugging his lifeless body.

"Why? why?!?!? "We didn't do anything!!" Jeonghui's mom shouts. His mom caresses his father's face, wishing he was still alive , still celebrating Christmas eve. Once again, the dark soul aims the gun at her. His mother seemed to accept her faith.

"Eomma!!" Jeonghui shouts, tears continuously flowing , hiding inside the closet.

"So you have someone else?" he sneers.

"Please! Don't go near him!! just take anything !" she pleads. The man continues to laughs, joy in hearing those words. He smiles at the mother and he shoots her.