As a reader, there are things I will judge heavily (and not so heavily) when deciding what to read.
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Any parts in your book that occur before the first chapter
The first chapter is a make it or break it for me...
I've been writing since I was in fourth grade, so I guess I can call myself a writer. :3 I'm always striving to better myself...at least when I'm not playing video games, reading books, rotting my brain on random internet surfing, or cleaning up the streets of Gotham. I think that's why I still suck at grammar and create more typos than I can catch.
I'm a 119 year old vampire that has finally stopped fearing vampires. I'm still working on zombies. On (In) my spare time I train penguins to make me sandwiches and to buy my groceries while I watch The Houston Texans be awesome on TV.
Wattpad has taught me lots of things and given me lots of cool friends and stories, but it also made me face my fear that I...actually like blond guys. Kin, Elias, and Reign are my blond boys.♡
Welp. I hope you find something you like on my page, and I hope you don't mind the blood TOO much. Thanks for stopping by! x3
★ Favorite Books ★
Dracula • Let the Right One In • A Song of Ice and Fire series • McTeague • Women of the Otherworld series • Ishmael • 1984 • The Count of Monte Cristo • Survivor • The Bible (as literature) • Blood Meridian • Child of God • The Last Picture Show • The Giver • Jane Eyre • Odd Thomas • IT • The Red Tent • NOS4A2 • fly on the wall • The Sirens of Titan
★ Need help? ★
Having trouble with that thing in your book? Feel free to PM me with your questions. Note that I DON'T take reading requests. You can, however, PM excerpts if you need specific help in a scene. I'll do my best to make it as awesome as possible!
Overall appearance
That's tidy!
Breakdown
It starts out nice enough, but then you start to sound drunk. It goes from feeling just the right amount of personal to wondering what you're talking about. Luckily you take me back to sane world before it's done.
Spelling and punctuation
Only one mistake that I saw, which I pointed out in your profile.
Likability
Like I said above, it's nice, then weird and a bit uncomfortable, then goes back to nice.
Final Grade and final thoughts
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