As a reader, there are things I will judge heavily (and not so heavily) when deciding what to read.
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Any parts in your book that occur before the first chapter
The first chapter is a make it or break it for me...
This is their cover. I'm not even going to bother making my own here.
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Blurb:
For Elizabeth, dreams are where she can live out her biggest wish; being the princess of a world with all of her stuffed animals. There, she's respected and constantly showered in love and praise by her fluffy subjects.
But in reality, she only puts fear into their cotton-filled hearts. After being ripped apart and sown back together so many times, it's no wonder why the deformed plushies' angry souls won't rest until they return the favor.
cover by @hxrmonize-
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You
Breakdown
Are
Spelling and punctuation
So
Likability
Fucking
Final Grade and final thoughts
Beautiful.
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Overall appearance
You're perfect. I wish I had something constructive to say. The chapter didn't drag on, introduced to the character and her personality, and the voice was perfectly childlike.
Breakdown
Spelling and punctuation
No signs of mistakes.
Likability
Final Grade and final thoughts
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