As a reader, there are things I will judge heavily (and not so heavily) when deciding what to read.
Writer Profile
Cover
Blurb
Any parts in your book that occur before the first chapter
The first chapter is a make it or break it for me...
●●● Sometimes, in the middle of nowhere, life happens ●●●
♡Moi♡
▪ Eighteen
▪ Gemini
▪ Early bird
▪ Nyctophile
▪ Optimistic
▪ Dimpled
▪ Gryffindor
▪ Selena Gomez buff
▪ Clumsy
▪ Potterhead 'Always'
♡My Works♡
▪ Me And Mr Not So Perfect (completed)
▪ The Babysitters (ongoing)
▪ 17 Again (coming soon)
♡Contact♡
▪ shreyam2433@gmail.com
▪ PM me anytime. I do reply.
♡P.S♡
▪ No follow requests.
▪ In for reading requests.
♡P.P.S♡
▪ I would anyday prefer strawberry flavor over chocolate.
▪ I love Harry Potter more than I love burgers.
▪ I seriously love burgers.
Overall Appearence
The list form makes it appear stiff.
Breakdown
In your writer's profile, I don't see anything that helps me to connect with you as a writer or anything that helps me to see the kind of writer you are.
I know you have dimples, like strawberry and get up early in the morning, but nothing shows me who you are as a writer.
It's cute with no depth.
Spelling and punctuation
Good news is you capitalize and show no weaknesses in this area.
Final grade and final thoughts
You aren't unlikable as a person in this, but if I was a potential reader I would finish this feeling like I've learned nothing about you as a writer. I wouldn't be driven to read.
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