Lena-Presents

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First Chapter

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First Chapter

First Impression: 

Condoms! 

Breakdown:

Where the hell are all the mistakes? 

Interesting characters. Real dialogue. Perfect amount of description. 

Fuck you. 

Spelling and punctuation:

Fuck you again. There isn't anything to complain about. 

Likability:

Definitely nothing to dislike. No overkill of dialogue tags. No repetitive words. I'm not a fan of not finding anything wrong. It disappoints me that there's nothing wrong. 


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