First Chapter
First Impression:
Condoms!
Breakdown:
Where the hell are all the mistakes?
Interesting characters. Real dialogue. Perfect amount of description.
Fuck you.
Spelling and punctuation:
Fuck you again. There isn't anything to complain about.
Likability:
Definitely nothing to dislike. No overkill of dialogue tags. No repetitive words. I'm not a fan of not finding anything wrong. It disappoints me that there's nothing wrong.
YOU ARE READING
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AléatoireAs a reader, there are things I will judge heavily (and not so heavily) when deciding what to read. Writer Profile Cover Blurb Any parts in your book that occur before the first chapter The first chapter is a make it or break it for me...