First Impression Reviews- CLOSED

EllenFairyBlue

Profile Review

Hello to every gem out there!

My name is Ellen FairyBlue-a unique name-yes, I know!

I'm a new writer hoping to improve my skills so don't be afraid to point out my errors. I won't bite, but the most I may do is ask you why out of curiosity. ^.^

Anywho, I'm interest in anything and everything fiction, so if you have a story feel free to recommend it to me. However, I do ask that you take a look at my stories as well, just to be fair.

With that being said, I must return to write and reading, so an adieu to all you sparking gems out there!

*****I don't do follow for follow, sorry.*****

••••Reading Requests are ones I take, so long as you join my book club. I need new members.^~^••••

Current Projects:

-->Tainted Hearts (Highest ranked #132 in horror)

-->The Moon & Grim Reaper Trilogy:

Book 1: Tales Beneath A White Moon (A novel, finished Oct, 7, 2016)

Book 2: Reaping of the Mourning Moon (A novel)

Book 3: Grim and Tragic (A novel)

-->You May Be Alpha, But So Am I

-->Make Me Yours

-->Foxy Fun (1st draft-still needs a lot of work)

--> Where Are They Now? (Interview Book) (Highest Ranked #49 in Random)

-->Terribly Demonic (highest rank #325 in paranormal)

--> The Fine Line Between Vampires Vampires and Werewolves (highest rank #830 in vampire)

--> One Mutual Love (CPN)

Projects To Come:

+Short Stories (My own collection of different fiction stories)

+The Half-Blood Mate

+The Journey (title subject to change later)

+Secret Pleasure (Will be returning soon)

+ Untitled (vampire story)

Social Media:

Textnovel--> http://www.textnovel.com/profile/Ellen-FairyBlue/26836/

Twitter--> https://twitter.com/EllenFairyblue

Review:

Overall appearance

My first two thoughts on this was lots of symbols and a lot of ongoing projects listed. 

Grade: B

Breakdown

Okay, so I'm not a fan of cute nicknames for readers, but as far as they go this one is at least not condescending and treating me like I'm a four year old, so it's not completely terrible.

It doesn't appear professional, but you also fully admit that you are just starting out, so no lower grade there. 

Mad props for not doing follow for follow.

Now, you bring up that you do take reading requests in two separate spots, both of them bringing up the expectation of different things. 

As far as the current projects go... My first assumption is that you will not put your whole heart into the book I want to read. All the other books you are writing will have to share. It will also make me question whether you finish what you start.