The main character hates themselves.
Example: I look in the mirror. "One hundred one pounds? I'm super fat."
Why This Is Annoying: Okay I know this is random but think of the cutest kid you know. Like 5 or 6 year olds or younger. Maybe a little bit older like Seven. 7 or less. Okay now think of them as teenagers who are insecure and stuff. A Horrible thing to think about right?
How To fix This: So I think 101 pounds (wizard 101 lmao) is a perfect weight. Unless if it is important to the story then please make them okay with themselves. Not everyone hates there body image. But don't make them love themselves either. Not low self-esteem or really high esteem.
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100 book cliches {Completed}
RandomHIGHEST RATING: #6 IN RANDOM WARNING: THERE ARE SWEARING MATURE THEMES AND TRIGGERING SUBJECTS Welcome to the Cliche Manual. I will explain to y'all the most known cliches and explain how to fix them, therefore, making your book more pleasant to re...
