Why are the parties so...wild?
Example: I walked past a couple who were kissing. You can barely see anything over the smoke (due to all the people smoking.) Alcohol and other stuff was there too.
Why This Is Annoying: So I put here that people under the age of 21 cant get access to alcohol. Oh dear me I was wrong. When I wrote this chapter I only ever been to family parties. So sorry for my ignorance on peer parties. I am too antisocial to go to one.
How To Fix This: Okay so there are some parties like that but don't overdo it. Maybe a few drunks etc but don't make it were everyone is high and there's a dead body on the floor. A couple making out. Maybe the MC gets drunk. Toilet paper? But not like out of the park cops come crazy unless its important. Then again I only seen this cliche in rom-coms and romances. Dont come at me though.
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