Demented daughter {Rewriting}

Sorting Hat

All first years file into the main hall. It was really crowded
"ROZA!!"
I sigh, only Lizzie calls me that.
"Come meet my new friend!!!" 
She grabs my arm and pulls me through the crowd, I couldn't see anything (short potato problems ;3)
Dumbledore Silences us
"Welcome newcomers!" Then he began a speech which I really didn't care about until he announced that the sorting would begin
The sorting hat chanted
""Oh you may not think I'm pretty,
But don't judge on what you see,
I'll eat myself if you can find
A smarter hat than me.

You can keep your bowlers black,
Your top hats sleek and tall,
For I'm the Hogwarts Sorting Hat
And I can cap them all.

There's nothing hidden in your head
The Sorting Hat can't see,
So try me on and I will tell you
Where you ought to be.

You might belong in Gryffindor,
Where dwell the brave at heart,
Their daring, nerve, and chivalry
Set Gryffindors apart;

You might belong in Hufflepuff,
Where they are just and loyal,
Those patient Hufflepuffs are true
And unafraid of toil;

Or yet in wise old Ravenclaw,
if you've a ready mind,
Where those of wit and learning,
Will always find their kind;

Or perhaps in Slytherin
You'll make your real friends,
Those cunning folks use any means
To achieve their ends.

So put me on! Don't be afraid!
And don't get in a flap!
You're in safe hands (though I have none)
For I'm a Thinking Cap!"

They began calling out names until I hear
"Lizbeth Riddle!" (Aka Lizzie my sister)
She walks up to get sorted but Draco's friend Gregory Goyle trips her. She falls flat on her face and everyone begins to snicker

"That's ENOUGH" Professor Mcgonagall yells
Lizzie scrambled to her feet and blushed and continued to walk up the steps and finally sits down on the stool and the sorting hat is placed on her behind her at the staff table I see Quirrel's lips tighten and he stares at me
"Quirrel!" I think "That's who my dad is hiding as"
"RAVENCLAW!" The hat yells and Lizzie stands looking relieved and walks to the Ravenclaw table
Quirrel's eye twitches.
"Rozaliya Riddle"
I sigh and walk toward her
Goyle sticks out his foot to trip me but I glare at him with my signature death stare and he tucks his foot in. Draco shoves him.
I keep walking and I sit on the stool
The hat is placed on my head
"Hmm...interesting" it mumbles
I close my eyes and the hat yells
"SLYTHERIN"
I let out a sigh and walk to the Slytherin table,
A big slytherin crest forms on my cloak and my tie changes to silver and green.
The sorting ends and we all go to the halls.
And obviously they put a big fat fluffy unicorn as the portrait.
I scream and push through the crowd, Draco grabs my arm pulls me in and covers my eyes. We get into the dormitory and I grab the nearest bed and throw myself into it
"What a day.."