So I'm working on Yandere Stepsister, and something kind of weird happened.
So during the first part, it's like, "Once upon a time the narrative is super distant and impersonal whenever it's Olivia's point of view."
Meanwhile, it cuts to, "When Chrom is featured, it's like Robin is crying while talking because this fairytale is f***** up."
So Olivia's section passes through a lot and is super passive, but Chrom's is slower and super emotional. So basically the tome changed, but that's because I wrote Olivia's one day, and then some time later I sat down and began to write Chrom's.
Should I allow sneak peeks at both sections to show what I mean? Spoiler free, of course.
Sad thing about this? I'm not even halfway done with Yandere Stepsister. And I might redo the first part all over. I have an idea of what I can do to fix it, which might cut the length a little if I do so.
(The song was chosen because of Yanderes appearing in Yandere Stepsister)
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The Sparrow Flies North Under New Management (Random Book #3)
De TodoWelcome to my third random book! This title is similar to my second random book, The Sparrow Flies South for the Winter *punches Emblian soldier* The title of the second book comes from Skulduggery Pleasant. Here you'll find randomness, drawings by...
