Awakened

Help

Hey guys.

First off thank you to all the lovely readers who vote and comment. You have no idea how much I look forward to seeing y'all. Truly makes my day brighter.

(Not shading my ghost readers. Y'all can continue being ghosts I don't really mind dw lol)

I need help though, and it's nothing major dw. It's just that this story is quite difficult at times. Sometimes I feel like I post a chapter without enough detail on what's going on Mikasa's or Annie's or any characters mind, and idk, I just feel like I may not describe their character growth well.

If something seems off in a chapter, like maybe Mikasa switched sides too fast, or her being sympathic or angry or happy or whatever seems too unrealistic let me know please.

I want to grow as a writer, and leaving me reviews on things I can improve will really help, and I feel like it will make the story better too. And this goes with any character or whatever too, like if something doesn't seem right with Arlise, or Tauriel or Levi or Hange or whatever.

I want their character growth to be as natural as possible.

Same with Mikannie.

Don't worry guys they're canon I promise (I mean hello it's a mikannie fanfic) but I want their relationship mend to be as natural as possible and not super quick and switching sides fast. Same with their character growth.

Anyways, that's what I need help on. I mean, I'll try my best to do what I can to make each chapter as good as possible but I'm not perfect so I may not catch everything so reviews are always welcome :)

Thank you all for reading and enjoy!