❝Dreams and dedication is a powerful combination.❞
- William Longwood
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Dedicated to jenziefeels because she wanted a dedication, (lol) thejenzieupdater for her lovely comment & rfc888 because she's supported me since my very first book♡ I love all three of you so much, thank you for being the best readers ever!
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Third person narrative
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Mackenzie Ziegler watches Brynn Rumfallo as she chews on the end of her drink bottle. Both girls were very anxious to get out of class and attend the end of term party at Lauren Orlando's house.
After the teacher had finally finished her lecture, she smiled and told the girls in the class to pack up quietly. Nobody listened, and high pitched chattering and laughing soon filled the room. Mackenzie and Brynn attend Highland Girls School; and to say they were pretty would be a big understatement.
Mackenzie Ziegler has long, chestnut hair that tumbles down her shoulder and big brown eyes to match. Her body has beautiful curves for her short height, and along with the light dusting of freckles and her small pink lips she's absolutely drop dead gorgeous– and she knows it.
Brynn Rumfallo is the exact opposite; her frame is tall, willowy, and skinny– but that doesn't make her any less gorgeous. Golden blonde hair cuts off at her shoulders, and her teeth seem to gleam when she smiles. Like Mackenzie, her attitude is cocky, but underneath she's a sweetheart.
So of course these two girls seem to rule Highland Girls School, because of their looks, dismissive attitudes, and their wealth.
But back to the present.
"Wanna come to mine and get ready?" Brynn asks Mackenzie, swinging her bag over her shoulder.
"Definitely." Mackenzie laughs.
"Okay good– because I have no idea what to wear!" Brynn giggles.
They walk out the door then, discussing all sorts of things like manis and pedis. Girls around them scatter, forever intimidated by the two best friends.
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"Lauren, I don't understand why you couldn't just have this stupid party somewhere else." Johnny Orlando groans to his little sister.
Lauren smiles, showing her pearly whites. "Well I want it here." She shrugs. "It's final!"
Johnny only groans, peeling off his soaking wet shirt and revealing the solid muscle on his chest. He'd just ran home from football practice in the rain.
"It'll be good for you." Lauren cheekily states after a while. "Maybe you'll actually socialise for once. Or better yet– meet a girl."
Johnny laughs incredulously, throwing his wet shirt at his minx of a little sister. "Shut up! I have girl friends."
"Whatever. You attend a boys school, I highly doubt that." Lauren scoffs.
"Go away loser." Johnny says, annoyed again. "I've gotta change." He then proceeds to try and shut the door in Lauren's face. She lets him, but not before shouting at him.
"Take a shower, and wear something nice! I don't want your style to ruin my reputation!"
"Whatever!" Johnny yells, rolling his eyes at how annoying his little sister can be.
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Sorry this is a short chapter! It's more to just introduce you to the main characters and their personalities– also their ages and school :)
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Fanfiction❝I can't be pregnant, I'm only seventeen!❞ High school was going great for Mackenzie- until her best friends brother knocked her up. ••• Genre: romance Status: completed
