✨COMPLETED✨
I took a few steps before I stopped to face him again.
"Jay?" I said, barely above a whisper.
"Hmm?"
"I love you. You know that right?" I asked, kind of unsure.
"of course. Of course I do." He said, scrunching his eyebrows as if he doesn...
Hi ladies and gentlemen (if I have any reading my book😬)
So I made this chapter solely for the purpose of receiving criticism. I want to know what you guys like or not like about this story. I need you guys to tell me:
✨What you like about this story.
✨What do you think would improve it.
✨Which character do you like? Why?
✨Which character is your least favourite?
✨Random Comments go here :)
This would really mean a lot to me and it'll help me grow as a writer :)
Thanks Again! The_Outkast
Alexis: Ya please help her, she's making my life a damn living hell.
Jaycee: SHE'S PLANNING ON KILLING ME and you think YOUR life is hell?!?!
Jace: Well you kind of deserve it you idiot for driving in a storm to begin with!
Jaycee: Shut up please...
Brenda: Can you both shut it! Our author needs help
Outkast: Awwww thank you Brenda :)
Brenda: Not so fast..... if you kill Sebastian I WILL END YOU!!!!! He's uh- important to us.
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Outkast: sooo you can all see why I need the help :)
Jace: Pssst, author, can you like.... make Sebastian move like 50 precincts over?? And make Brenda hate him??
Outkast: Did you not hear her?!?! She will end me!
Jace: She's a figment of your imagination, you can make her do anything!
Outkast: True dat...
Jace: Just.....please....
Outkast: Awwww okay, I'll see what I can do❤️
Jaycee: Hey! Don't kill me!
Outkast: They warned you not to drive in a thunderstorm. But does Jaycee listen to anyone?? Nooooo
