Hi there @HeySteff!
How's it going? :) I hope things are lookin' up over there.
This review took a few days because of my schedule but here is your requested critique!
Firstly, since you aren't new to my critiquing style, I took the liberty of writing this down by hand, just because it's something I haven't tried. ;) It was rather fun.
Anyways...
Due to lack of time, I only got to read a few chapters of your new story, but I made sure to give pointers and some suggestions for you to read and use as a guide when you're in the editing process.
Posted below are my initial comments on your story:
So, that's it, basically :)
Should you have any questions, feel free to comment below or message me via PM. I'll try to respond and provide the assistance you need as soon as I can.
Keep writing and improving your work! :)
Your friendly critic,
MSy
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