21: "It's You" (by HeySteff)

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Hi there @HeySteff!

How's it going? :) I hope things are lookin' up over there.

This review took a few days because of my schedule but here is your requested critique!

Firstly, since you aren't new to my critiquing style, I took the liberty of writing this down by hand, just because it's something I haven't tried. ;) It was rather fun.

Anyways...

Due to lack of time, I only got to read a few chapters of your new story, but I made sure to give pointers and some suggestions for you to read and use as a guide when you're in the editing process.

Posted below are my initial comments on your story:


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So, that's it, basically :)

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So, that's it, basically :)

Should you have any questions, feel free to comment below or message me via PM. I'll try to respond and provide the assistance you need as soon as I can.

Keep writing and improving your work! :)


Your friendly critic,


MSy

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