So I've been told by a two editors/critics already that the POV's of this story was "hard to understand." They didn't know who's POV it was because I didn't put one there.
If the chapter starts off without saying either ~Jasmine's POV~ or ~Kaylee's POV~ at the top then IT IS NO POV. (I think that it'd look stupid if I had to put "No POV" at the top every time) Seriously, it bothers me because its not hard to understand. This one girl was being really rude about it going off about how she had no idea what was going on and how it was disorganized.. As if I'm some sort of professional writer. ಠ_ಠ
Anyway, just wanted to let you know I was sorry if it wasn't clear to any of you. Have a nice day/night you beautiful person, you. :D
P.S. Mikaylee & Jasmine dont actually look like the girl in the cover. It's just a really pretty cover and I can't seem to get a better one no matter how many times I try.
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One Last Hope
Novela JuvenilTroubled twin sisters, Jasmine and Mikaylee, are forced to go back to the same town that has been haunting them for years with their abusive psychotic father. The twins father, Jon, has found himself in "love" with his ex girlfriend over in Californ...
