Found By Logan Henderson by Priceisrightrusher
Judged by Pinkainfinity
Cover: 2/5
Description: 2/5
Grammar: 2/10
Character Development: 4/10
Plot: 4/20
Total:14/50
You really need to work on your punctuation. There was none except the speech marks. The description of your book was really poorly written as one, single, sentence which did not make sense at all.
The Message by Coyotteslayer53
Judge: jessieg20
Cover: 1/5
Description: 1/5
Followed Required Accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character Development: 6/10
Plot: 10/15
Total: 29/50
Three sentence review: Overall a unique way of writing the story and is indeed eye catching at first glance but the story is a little messy. Author doesn't explain certain parts or objects clearly. Character development needs to be worked on as well.
The Four Elements Book One, The Whispering Seas by The_Reader4000_
Judged by Pinkainfinity
Cover: 2/5
Description: 4/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character Development: 6/10
Plot: 15/20
Total: 33/50
I can see the potential in this book! It's a fairly decent concept too! Although for me, the characters are a bit young for these things, or maybe that's just me.
The Crossing Destinies by Witto150
Judge: TheSlayWriter
Cover: 3/5
Description: 3/5
Following: 5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Plot: 14/15
Total: 41/50
Review: Crossing Destinies had an interesting plot, but the cover was not eye catching enough
for me. If I were searching for an interesting book and I read the description of this book, I
would not be intrigued. Overall, there was well use of correct grammar.
The Adventure Within The Quests by JohnMarston17
Judged by Pinkainfinity
Cover: 2/5
Description: 2/5
Grammar: 5/10
Character Development: 8/10
Plot: 14/20
Total: 31/50
This book from the start kind of feels, rushed. Some of the parts you could have used a bit more words to describe it, therefore slowing it down. But this was an exciting book!
Azorath's Adventure by PrinceOfPunsJosh
Judge: jessieg20
Cover: 3/5
Description: 3/5
Followed Required Accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 7/10
Character development: 7/10
Plot: 13/15
Total: 38/50
Three sentence review: Has a very interesting and unique plot that would capture any reader's attention. Excellent use of vocabulary by the author. However, author needs to work on his/her description in the story as well as his/her tenses.
The Monsters Within by HaileyKnights
Judge: weasleyqueen-
Cover: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Following: 5/5
Grammar: 7/10
Character Development: 7/10
Plot: 11/15
Total: 37/50
Review: The cover is great! I really like it, however the description was too long. Even though what it was trying to communicate was slightly intriguing, I wouldn't have read the whole thing if I didn't have to. Make sure you only add commas when necessary. No more, no less. If you need help with that there are many websites online that can help you. I did learn about your main characters but it was very slow. Each thing they do should reveal something about their personality, and make sure that you don't make a character do something that their actions don't go along with. For example don't have arch nemesis' yell at each other, and then date a minute later...unless you're Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy but that's a different matter. I see potential in this story! Just try to make the individual chapters a bit shorter as extremely long ones are a turnoff, and develop the personalities. Overall great work!
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