The Zodiac Rebellion by lifeismusic077
Judge: camjensen
Cover: 3/5
Description: 3/5
Grammar: 5.5/10
Character development: 4/10
Plot: 10/20
Total: 25.5/50
Three sentence review: The story has potential, and a lot of it. I feel like it could've been written better, though. The POV's were weird and hard to remember who the characters were, and I think it would've been better if you would've introduced the characters different;y. The plot was confusing and I could barely understand what was happening. Although, the writing did get better as I got to the end. So i suggest rewriting the earlier parts to match the writing level towards the end. (More than three sentences sorry)
Masked Girls by MaskedSt
Judge: camjensen
Cover: 4.5/5
Description: 5/5
Grammar: 9.5/10
Character development: 8/10
Plot: 18/20
Total: 45/50
Three sentence review: Your story is original, and written very well. I really enjoy the way you write, it's very vivid and not repetitive. I think you have a real talent for writing.
Something to Look At by WritingForTheLiving
*rejudged: infinitemonster16
Cover: 3/5
Description: 5/5
Following: 5/5
Grammar: 3/5
Character Development: 3/10
Plot: 8/20
Total: 27/50
Review: I think the character interaction was a bit rushed, if the main character likes to be alone why did he trust this one guy so quickly? However, this story has potential if you maybe expanded the details a tad more and need shorter paragraphs to make it easier to read through.
The Chemistry Between Us by arlised52
Judge: camjensen
Cover: 3/5
Description: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character development: 5/10
Plot: 18/20
Total: 39/50
Three sentence review: It's too short to see much character development, but I can see the plot clearly. Good job, because most books are harder to see the plot this early. Keep writing your story, and it'll turn out well.
Cracked by him by ScarlettBlackDaisy
Judge: camjensen
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