1) Title: Beneath the Darkened Heart
Author: littlesilverwren
Tenses: 8/10
Character opinions: 8/10
Planned out: 8/10
Book fits title and description: 8/10
Book title: 4/5
Follows: 5/5
Total: 41/50
Three sentence review: Overall, a great action book that any reader will be captivated by. However, there are some grammar mistakes that author should take note of. Author can also cut down on unnecessary dialogues or activities and to go straight to the point.
2) Title: Mind Over Mask
Author: anya_riva
Tenses: 10/10
Character opinions: 9/10
Planned out: 9/10
Book fits title and description: 9/10
Book title: 5/5
Follows: 5/5
Total: 47/50
Three sentence review: An amazing story that can keep any reader absorbed into the book for hours. Author uses an array of vocabulary and descriptions of characters and actions are also well thought out. However, author can work on giving the characters stronger personality/ personality traits to make each character unique.
3) Title: To Be a Spy
Author: warrior_srarhb
Tenses: 10/10
Character opinions: 9/10
Planned out: 9/10
Book fits title and description: 10/10
Book title: 4/5
Follows: 5/5
Total: 47/50
Three sentence review: It is a fascination to read and will allow any reader to enjoy it just from the first couple of chapters. Description of characters and actions are very vivid and can allow any reader to visualise accordingly. However, author can work on the spelling and grammar mistakes scattered between paragraphs.
4) Title: The Storm Arises
Author: 2ClockWork
Tenses: 9/10
Character opinions: 7/10
Planned out: 7/10
Book fits title and description: 8/10
Book title: 4/5
Follows: 5/5
Total: 40/50
Three sentence review: An engaging story that will keep anyone reading due to the eye-catching plot. However, there are a few grammar mistakes that author can notice of. Author can also cut down on the word "said" and replace it with words that hold emotions like demanded, announced, reprimanded, etc.
5) Title: The Crossing Destinies
Author: Witto150
Tenses: 9/10
Character opinions: 9/10
Planned out: 9/10
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