Stars to the Vampires by lifeismusic077
Judge: MarloPolo
Cover: 2/5
Description: 1/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character : 4/10
Plot : 5/15
Total : 20/50
Review: While I was reading I found myself getting very confused. I had no idea where I was, what was going on and who these characters really were. The author seems to have a lot of ideas but doesn't have the skills yet to work them into a book.
The Sunset Stone by JensoCam
Judge: infinitemonster16
Cover: 3/5
Description: 5/5
Following: 5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Character Development: 9/10
Plot: 15/15
Total: 45/50
Review: There were a few grammar issues and I think the cover could be better. Besides all that, wow the plot of this is so captivating and I feel so drawn in that I want to read more. The way you describe the different lives of each character, I want to read more to see how it all ties in.
The Magus Affliction by Todom2
Judge: Sonenclaire
Cover: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Following Accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 5/10
Character Development: 5/10
Plot: 17/20
Total: 35/50
Three Sentence Review: The story is ridden with spelling and dialogue tag errors as well as the confusion of some homonyms. That being said, the plot is actually quite exciting and filled with action. Would like to see more development in Travis and Elena's characters to help the reader build a greater connection and understanding of why they do what they do.
The Last by nrhsynvl
Judge: MarloPolo
Cover: 5/5
Description: 4/5
Grammar: 7/10
Character : 5/10
Plot : 7/15
Total : 33/50
Review: Although the description is very promising the actual story has a few problems. The story is very cliché and the characters feel very unnatural. I recommend the author to revisit the earlier chapters and work on that.
The Chronicles of a Genovian Prince by madisonCarterMoore
Judge: infinitemonster16
Cover: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Following: 5/5
Grammar: 3/5
Character Development: 5/10
Plot: 5/20
Total: 26/50
Review: It was really hard to read and follow with the overly long paragraphs and the never ending explanations. It needs more action and dialogue and less details. It's also hard to judge based on 3 chapters.
The Sequoian Heir by Rachellipson01
Judge: Sonenclaire
Cover: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character Development: 6/10
Plot: 15/20
Total: 34/50
Three Sentence Review: Grammar and spelling errors are peppered throughout but are not distracting, though the language is quite informal. The plot is logical though the land of Sequoi is not quite explained the interjections from the stream of consciousness style can sometimes be distracting. Focus on developing the main trio as people beyond behaviour so that the reader can establish a stronger emotional connection with them.
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