Taken in by Kogan by Priceisrightrusher
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 1/5
Description: 3/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 4/10
Character development: 1/10
Plot: 2/15
Total: 11/50
Three sentence review: You should work on your grammar, especially punctuation as your sentences go on without any. Also the plot feels kind of "empty" it doesn't really lead to anything, it's just Logan and Kendall taking care of Sparkle everyday. And the cover is very simple and boring, maybe change it up a bit?
Monster by wolfie169
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 10/10
Character development: 9/10
Plot: 15/15
Total: 48/50
Three sentence review: Everything is so creative and written in such a way as if it's a real book. I can relate to the characters emotions a lot, it just gets you hooked. There's barely anything to change about it!
LGBTQ+ Short Stories by WritingForTheLiving
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 0/5
Description: 1/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character development: 7/10
Plot: 6/15
Total: 34/50
Three sentence review: The stories are a little weird, for example in the first story I imagined Oran being a kid and Ghent middle-aged so it was weird having them kiss. Considering the stories being so short, the character development is okay. There's no clear plot as they're one shots. But I think you should work a little more on your grammar. (Sorry this was more than three sentences)
50 mates of greywolf by Mates_of_Greywolf
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 5/5
Description: 4/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character development: 1/10
Plot: 7/15
Total: 38/50
Three sentence review: You really didn't hold back with anything. The characters didn't really develop as it was mostly sex. I think you should get more into Bella's background and parents, as it's a very interesting topic in the book.
The Old Jameson Place by RealLife_FakeStories
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 3/5
Description: 4/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Character development: 2/10
Plot: 13/15
Total: 40/50
Three sentence review: This story was really short but interesting at the same time. It ended a little too quickly though, I expected to see them dig into this Mr. Leone. There wasn't much character development cause we barely got to know the characters.
Where is the Wolf!? by Nico610
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 2/5
Description: 1/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character development: 4/10
Plot: 10/15
Total: 38/50
Three sentence review: I think you should work more on your description as it's confusing and doesn't say a lot about the story. Also you could work a little more on your grammar. There wasn't much character development as I feel like all the characters are "flat" except a few.
RUNE'S UNDERSTANDING(Book One) The Lost ones by KarrieBloomer
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character development: 8/10
Plot: 13/15
Total: 45/50
Three sentence review: It's very interesting and keeps the reader going. But at the same time I think we should get to know Rune's parents a little more. Apart from that the book is great!
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