Story of Horrors by Brokuyasu
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover: 1
Description: 5
Following: 5
Grammar: 5
Character Development: 4
Plot: 10
Total: 30/50
Review:
Capital letters are not placed properly. There are no characters whatsoever. They are like short stories and poems of horror placed together. I didn't get the idea what the author was trying to convey.
My Girlfriend is a Serial Killer by shelbi23
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover: 3
Description: 2
Following: 5
Grammar: 4
Character Development: 7
Plot: 11
Total: 32/50
Review:
Quite interesting plot. But not described well. There's no feel of horror or mystery, it feels like some nursery story.
Curiosity Killed the Cat by ShewantsChoco
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover: 4
Description: 5
Following: 5
Grammar: 7
Character Development: 9
Plot: 15
Total: 45/50
Review:
Nice concept. The story is delivered in a good way. Overall nice book.
THE DARKEST SECRET by _22Shreya
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover: 2
Description: 3
Following: 5
Grammar: 6
Character Development: 4
Plot: 5
Total: 25/50
Review:
The characters are developing way too fast. The plot is just '13 reasons why' again, just a little improvision here and there.
It Once Happened with me by ishitadas21
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover: 5
Description: 4
Following: 5
Grammer: 6
Character Development: 9
Plot: 15
Total: 44/50
Review:
Innovative plot. Just need to focus on writing skills. Otherwise this book is a nice read.
The Perfect Imperfection by ScarlettBlackDaisy
Judge: Awesomegal3015
Cover: 5/5
Description:5/5
Following required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Plot: 14/15
Total: 49/50
Review: This book is really riveting and well written. Despite English not being you're native tongue, your grammar is exceptional. It's different and refreshing, though I'm a bit confused to what she's going to do and what or who Tyler is, the plot is well planned.
The Perfect she by forgotten27c
Judge: Awesomegal3015
Cover: 5/5
Description:5/5
Following required accounts: 5/5
Grammar:10 /10
Flow of poetry/short story: 15/15
Communicating a story: 15/15
Total: 50/50
Review: Really well written, it was enticing to see inside the mind of the killer. Your grammar was really good, I felt the emotions of the MC, it was totally different to what I normally read but it as really good. Loved the twist at the end, your story shows that you thought really hard about what you wanted and you succeeded.
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