Paper Doll- chocolettie
Sentence Flow 9/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 9/10
Tenses 10/10
Book title 4/5
Follows 5/5
Total 47/50
Review: This is beautiful. Your words are enlightening. I like the idea of using lower case letters, it gives the poems a totally different meaning.
My book of Poems- Amna323
Sentence Flow 9/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 10/10
Tenses 10/10
Book title 3/5
Follows 5/5
Total 47/50
Review: Yes, your title is a perfect fit, but I think it could have been something much more intriguing. Your poems are interesting to read and the emotions they portray is amazing. You have a knack for poetry.
Mankind's Symphony- Hunter_Yonk
Sentence Flow 9/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 10/10
Tenses 10/10
Book title 5/5
Follows 5/5
Total 49/50
Review: I think the title fits right with what you talk of. This was amazing to read. Truly, a beautiful insight on the world.
Broken Diamonds- StellaKathrin
Sentence Flow 8/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 9/10
Tenses 10/10
Book title 4/5
Follows 5/5
Total 46/50
Review: It's not that they aren't written well, but I don't think it's poetry. There's some grammar issues you should work on, like placing commas, so the reader doesn't have to reread sentences to understand what's being communicated. Overall, I really like it.
Moon Child- StarHues
Sentence Flow 8/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 10/10
Tenses 10/10
Book title 4/5
Follows 5/5
Total 47/50
Review: As soon as I read your first poem, I was awestruck. It's beautifully written. You have done well, continue with your good work.
So Far Apart- xxKenzxxx
Sentence Flow 9/10
Theme 10/10
Book Fits Title and Description 10/10
Tenses 10/10
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