What a View by Brokuyasu
Judge: miss_rebel432
Cover: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character Development: 9/10
Plot: 16/20
Total: 44/50
Three Sentence Review: It is a satisfying story. But try to improve your grammar. And by grammar I mean the grammar in the conversations.
The Baler Rescue by Priceisrightrusher
Judge: Alpheus_Alpha
Cover: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Follow: 5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Character Development: 6.5/10
Plot: 14/15
Score: 43.5/50
Review: Fairly okay story. Not very great since the writing style is slightly sloppy and forces the reader to take extra effort to read and understand the story. As for the book, I don't really know how it's a fanfiction. Could use some work, a so-so story.
What's broken Can be fixed by candycrum21
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 2/5
Description: 2/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 5/10
Character development: 0/10
Plot: 6/15
Total: 18/50
Three sentence review: The thought behind the writing is good, but when you put it down into words it doesn't make much sense. The character development didn't go too well either. Also at the beginning there wasn't much spacing which can be a little hard for the reader to know which line they're reading, though you're getting better at that towards the end.
The Magical Son of Poseidon by The_Reader4000_
Judge: WritingForTheLiving
Following: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Description: 2/5
Grammar: 6/10
Character Development: 5/10
Plot: 9/15
Total: 30/50
Three sentence review: The story though cliche and seemingly planned out had a lack of substance to keep me fully interested. The author should try to be aware of their own potential because some descriptions and little actions did bring me back. If they improve upon their grammar and try to make the story more original and less basic of ooc stories then they really could make an amazing fanfiction bloom from what they have already in a single chapter.
Scarred and Unloved by KittyWhiteCat
Judge: miss_rebel432
Cover: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character Development: 9/10
Plot: 20/20
Total: 48/50
Three Sentence Review: Amazing story. At first it may seem a bit too abusive. But overall it's a good story.
Lexi Weasley by Weasleyqueen13
Judge: Alpheus_Alpha
Cover: 3/5
Description: 4.5/5
Follow: 5/5
Grammar: 7.5/10
Character Development: 10/10
Plot: 15/15
Score: 45/50
Review: Very nice story. The writing style is okay and at the same time, somewhat sloppy, The plot is intriguing and it invites the reader to turn the page, which is an extremely valuable aspect of any good book.
Hogwarts reunion- 25 Years Later by Hannah_Lily
Judge: potatopll
Cover: 4/5
Description: 2/5
Follows required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character development: 4/10
Plot: 5/15
Total: 25/50
Three sentence review: The story is very well written, but I think that things moved too fast and was a bit unrealistic. Sometimes you skipped a word in a sentence but that isn't a major problem. I also feel like you didn't do a proper ending for the book, otherwise the book is good.
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