My Book of Poems by Amna323
Judge: AphroditeCampSawi
Cover: 1/5
Description: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Character: 9/10
Plot: 18/20
Total: 43/50
Three Sentence Review: The cover was not that eye-catching. I suggest that you should put different titles like "Pain", "Friend etc. The plot, it would be better if you tell the reason why the character feels lonely or depressed.
Unheard Thoughts by BananaZurc
Judge: AphroditeCampSawi
Cover: 2/5
Description: 1/5
Grammar: 7/10
Character: 7/10
Plot: 12/20
Total:29 /50
Three Sentence Review: The cover is full of stickers from other contests which makes the cover over decorated Some of your poems don't have punctuation mark so the feelings is unknown. The description is too short.
Accidental Meet by Umacdnathan
Judge: AphroditeCampSawi
Cover: 0/5
Description: 2/5
Grammar: 5/10
Character: 9/10
Plot: 15/20
Total: 31/50
Three Sentence Review: Characters have unique names, I don't know the true personality of the characters so I can't judge it. It is not a cliché story so it's good news. Some words are misspelled.
Blacklist by MaskedSt
Judge: infinitemonster16
Cover: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Followed required accounts: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Flow: 9/10
Neat/Organization: 15/15
Total: 48/50
Review: The cover made so much sense once I had read the story and wow did I love the idea of characters being played like in a game. This was a well written piece so good job. My one thing was the purposely misspelled swear words ruined the mood and flow, but I understand why you would do that.
Paper Doll by chocolettie
Judge: AphroditeCampSawi
Cover: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Grammar: 10/10
Character: 8/10
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