Her Choice by KittyWhiteCat
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover - 2
Description - 2
Following the required accounts - 5
Grammar - 3.5
Character development - 5
Plot - 5
Total - 22.5/50
Review: Situations doesn't match with the character's reactions. The sentences could be written in a better way. The parts where dialogues are written in other languages like Spanish, it could've been translated in English for the ease of the readers. The plot doesn't even make sense.
Don't You Remember? by CarrieGChandler
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover - 3
Description - 3
Following the required accounts - 0
Grammar - 6
Character development - 10
Plot - 14
Total - 36/50
Review: The dialogues are a bit confusing. The story is quite beautiful and fresh.
Guarding Angel by ScarlettBlackDaisy
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover - 4
Description - 5
Following the required accounts - 5
Grammar - 9
Character development - 9
Plot - 14
Total - 46/50
Review: The plot is intriguing. The characters are well written and the scenes are perfecting described. Overall the story has potential in it.
Until we Meet Again by Yugana_Penrozu
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover - 4
Description - 5
Following the required accounts - 5
Grammar - 9
Character development - 10
Plot - 15
Total - 48/50
Review: Simple yet beautiful. The concept is simple yet the way it is delivered to the readers, it' s heart wrenching.
Blinded by Perfection by Crystalclear_Em
Judge: MFaithRoseM
Cover - 1
Description - 3
Following the required accounts - 5
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