Two Guys and the Monster Musume Girls (Canceled)

Chapter 2: Trying to make the snakegirl comfortable.... I guess it's working

Toby: Hekre's the living room, not much here to show you but it's pretty normal.
Miia: Uh huh.
Toby: And to our right is the kitchen. I usually cook but on Fridays, Mike makes some really good mac and cheese, so look forward to that. To our left is the hallways. We have 6 bedrooms, don't ask why, and I'll show you to your room.
Toby leads Miia down the hall. Toby stops infront of a room to his left and Miia stops dead in her tracks.
Toby: This is my room. If you ever need anything and I'm not in the living room, just knock.
Miia: O-ok.
Toby: The room to my right is Mike's. Just... don't go in there. It's basically a garbage hill in there.
Toby then feels his phone vibrates. He pulls it out and sees a text from Mike saying "I HEARD THAT MOTHERFUCKER!!! YOU'RE ROOM ISN'T ANY BETTER!!!".
Toby: How the hell did he hear me?!
Miia: What?
Toby: Nothing. Just Mike being a prick.
Toby and Miia walk towards the back until Toby stops in front of the last lefthand side door.
Toby: This will be your room. Please make your room how ever you like. I'll start making lunch.
Toby leaves and Miia watches as he heads towards the kitchen. Miia sighs and slithers into her bedroom.

(Few minutes later)

Toby: LUNCH IS READY!!!
Miia slithers her way into the living room. Toby has made 3 plates of some steak and mash potatoes. Miia sits down and grabs a plat and fork.
Miia: Why'd you make 3 plates?
Toby: Wait for it.
Just then, Mike kicks open the door and takes his shoes off.
Mike: WHERES THE FOOD?!
Toby: Right there.
Mike sits in a chair and starts eating his food. Miia stares dumbfoundly at him. Mike notices Miia's looks.
Mike: Hmmm? Everything ok?
Miia: Y-y-yeah everything's A ok!
Miia puts on a fake smile but Mike can see the bullshit.
Mike: I can see the bullshit Miia, what's on your mind?
Miia: N-nothing's on my-
Miia then feels someone's hand on her shoulder. She looks up and sees Toby looking down at her.
Toby: What's wrong Miia?
Miia's heart starts beating really fast and her face turns red.
Miia: W-well... Do you guys hate me?
Mike starts laughing. Miia starts getting angry.
Miia: HEY, IT'S NOT FUNNY!!! IT'S A REAL QUESTION!!
Mike: Why would Toby hate you,  he most likely has a super huge-
Toby runs over and starts covering his mouth.
Toby: Fucking asshole, shut your mouth.
Mike pushes off Toby.
Mike: Ok jeez. Gosh, can't handle a joke.
Miia: So you don't hate me?
Mike: Me? Nah, you're fine. My boy Toby needs a girlfriend.
Toby's face goes pure red.
Toby: Sh-shut up!! You know I couldn't do that even if I wanted to!!
Mike starts laughing and Toby starts yelling, not realizing that Miia is smiling and blushing very hard. Miia starts giggling and eating her food. Mike and Toby stare.
Toby: What's funny?
Miia: Just glad you don't hate me is all!
Mike smiles.
Mike: Of course we don't hate you. I'm not a guy who hates you for your looks but for your actions. And Toby just likes any girl who's cute. Being a snake is just an added bonus.
Toby and Miia start going crimson.
Toby: SHUT THE FUCK UP MIKE!!!
Mike starts laughing hysterically.
Toby: Jeez, if you keep this up you'll actually scare her away.
Mike: And you won't gey a girlfriend.
Toby: ENOUGH WITH THE GIRLFRIEND BUSINESS!!!

(Few hours later)

Toby is at the sink washing dishes when Mike gets up.
Mike: Imma go to bed dude, dudette.
Toby: Goodnight my dude.
Mike: Goodnight Tobez.
Mike walks to his room and enters it and shut the door. A few minutes later Toby finishes the dishes and turns off the T.V. and heads to his room. Before he could open it, Miia walks out of her room.
Miia: H-hey Toby.
Toby: Hey Miia.
Miia: I have a question.
Toby: Sure, what is it?
Miia: Do you.... like me?
Toby takes a step back in shock. Miia starts freaking out.
Miia: IMEANYOUDON'THAVETOANSW
ERIFYOUWANTIJUSTWANTTOKNOWBUTYOUDON'THAVETOSAYANYTHING!!
Toby: No no no, it's ok. Um sure, I like you. You're cute, nice, friendly. *coughs* hot as fuck *coughs*.
Miia: What?
Toby: N-nothing!! So, does that help ease your mind?
Miia: Yeah! Thanks!
Toby: Welcome.
Miia: Hey Toby?
Toby: Yeah?
Miia: Do you mind if I start calling you darling?
Toby stares at her for a few seconds.
Toby: Nope!! Goodnight!!
Miia: Goodnight darling.
Toby quickly runs into his room and shuts the door. Miia smiles and heads back into her room and shuts the door.

(Inside Toby's room)

Toby's face is pure red and his heart is beating like crazy.
Toby: Holy shit, I can't handle this. She's just to fucking cute. I just need some rest.
Toby walks over to his bed and falls onto his bed and starts going to sleep.

YAY!!! MORE MONSTER MUSUME!!! Luv all the reads the first chapter got in one day. Thanks so much. Now, I know only Zuzumiee and hopefully nekoman4 will give me feed back on this chapter. I also want KaitoYukimuraOfRwby to give me some feedback. I NEED CRITICISMS DAMNIT AND YOU AUSTIN, WHO'S THE ONLY ONE IK TO HAVE DONE A HAREM STORY BEFORE, ARE QUALIFIED TO TELL ME THAT THIS IS PRETTY SHIIIITTTT!!! All joking aside, really want feedback, criticism is much appreciated, it helps me become a better writer. So I hope you schmucks enjoy and yeaaaaaah.... BYE!!!