Should I re write this story?
I don't think I would try to work in a story at all haha cbf to do that 😂
But like the writing itself is SO bad, should I rewrite each chapter and see if I can make it a little better maybe?
I just reread the first chapter and oh my god.
Blushing. "You" "you" blushing "you" blushing "you" "you" "you" "you" blushing blushing blushing, occasionally swapping to "her" accidentally
Sweet lord it never ended lol
So what do you think?
Should I rewrite this into actual English lol
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A Chance Romance || pjm ✓
FanfictionSet in: Australia Complete Y/n is in year 12, 18 years old and she's never had a boyfriend in her life. All her friends have one, but to be fair she's gone to girls schools for her entire life and the most she's ever spoken to a boy? Her older brot...