Chapter 71

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David walked up to Number 8192 and as soon as he typed in the code, the door opened and he had five guns to his head.

When he entered, Marion greeted him.

"Hello, David."

"Marion... Where are the kids? Let them go... Now!"

Marion shifted her attention. "Raphael. Escort David."

Raphael, an ugly troll, put a gun to David's head and walked him into a room.

There they were; The kids all tied up, and Ella in a metal chair surrounded by salt.

Jackie and Jenna screamed, "DAD!" simultaneously.

"Don't you worry about me. They're going to let you go. Ella, don't bother fighting them here, just go home immediately and keep everyone safe. I love all of you."

Marion entered the room and ordered her guards to release the children.

The children's ropes were cut and everyone was freed.

The children lingered, wanting to be around David.

"Go!" David yelled at them, to escape while he still had a say in the matter. The children ran.

"Finish him." Marion ordered.

With a click, the bullet was put into the chamber. Raphael's finger lingered on the trigger.

David cringed, knowing what would happen next.

Raphael's hand squeezed the trigger, send a bullet into David's head.

David screamed in immense pain, as another bullet went into his head, silencing him and sending blood splattering across the room. And from down the road, Jackie, Jenna, and Augustus screamed, "Daddy!!!"

Sobs convulsed in their chests and everyone she'd at tear. Ella took charge, and calmed them down, despite their great loss.

"We need to get home." Ella said to the group.

Everyone followed her as they ran down the pitch black street towards Laurel and Tamani's house.

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Sorry, people. It had to be done... I've been planning this for a while.

How did you like it? I hope it was good... Like not good happy. Like good the sad type.

Please tell me: do you like these parts (60 and up) as much as the beginning parts (1-60)?

Sorry I haven't had much time to write but I'll try and post as much as possible.

Oh and PS: It's my 13th birthday today!!! Yayyy!! I'm so happy that I decided to put my homework down to write a lot of Entwined and Divergent Fanficton!

Please check out my alternate ending to Divergent if you haven't already done so. I think it's my best writing ever, so please tell me what you think!

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